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Hello my dear bloggers, This is my very first post on a blog focusing on posts related to outer space. It is going to be more aligned towards human interest stories such as what happens behind the scenes of space exploration missions. Any sort of feedback, positive or negative is always welcome.
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its really good dr 😍😊😊
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Love your “about” page!
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Nice 1st post Jo
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This is lovely
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I love it!!
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Great post dear and nice about page
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Wonderful post, well written. Space and anything related to it are my all time favourites. So, I am following you and eagerly waiting for more posts. But one thing though, the image is not displaying. I am not sure whether it is just for me.
Also, feel free to visit my blog as well.
https://ahotcuppalife.wordpress.com/2018/05/11/weird-dreams-on-stage/
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This one’s a great first post. I love it!
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What an awesome first post! And on a fascinating topic. 🙂 Keep it up–I look forward to reading more!
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Just a kind and curious soul….passing through this week’s First Friday. How is everyone doing today?
I am going to read your posts, so comment them below and lets have some fun, if you use social media then I would love to follow you guys there too ❤️
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Welcome to all the newbies! Hope you’re having fun!
Happy blogging!
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Hey I really appreciate this post! I hope people like my site & follow. Im nervous but I’m not backing down. Much love to everyone here.
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Don’t be nervous! I enjoyed reading your post and your on the right track for sure! I really enjoy your writing style especially in your “about” section – coffee is always a good idea! Keep going! 😊
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Thank you very much Rosie! It means a lite, truly & wholeheartedly 💛
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Your welcome!
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Hey! You write “Welcome to my blog! I recommend that for an extremely pleasant experience, you grab yourself a cup of coffee & something sweet to nibble on. The universe only knows thats how I enjoy my light reading.”
But the picture on the background communicates something else than light reading! At least to me 😉 That’s either more dreamy, distant, thinking, maybe even gloomy..
And, in recap, it’s one paragraph… Maybe I’m a nitpicker, and please don’t be offended! It’s just easier to read when a post is divided in several paragraphs.
But! Good start and all the best with the blog!
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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah ill definitely check out those details!
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Hey, I absolutely love your about/intro! Writing from the heart is so powerful and I hope you’ll continue to let your thoughts flow through this channel! All the best man 😊
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💛💛💛 Thank you
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Pretty decent blog. It seems like a spot for you to just get your thoughts out and even somewhat tell a story. Nothing to be nervous about. You’re doing great.
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Welcome to the blogging community! Looks like you’re off to a great start! 🙂 I think my only think would be to maybe separate your writing into smaller paragraphs instead of one huge chunk. It would definitely make reading through your posts a lot smoother! Keep writing! 🙂
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I enjoyed the colors and layout of your blog it definitely had the get a cup of coffee and read a little vibe to it. Now just blog blog blog 🙂
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Hlww guys this was my first post which I published last month.I hope you will enjoy.
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Hey, i just checked out your blog! Your post is a great read! I love posts as such that make you think…
I noticed your blog doesn’t have an “about” page, this would be useful to add so new visitors to your blog can see what you write about and decide whether to follow or not.
Also some pictures would be nice in your post too, but great start otherwise!
Happy blogging! Rosie 🌺
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Thank you
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Hey, this is my first time. Hope you guys will give it a read 🙂
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Lovely first post!
I noticed you don’t have an “about” page on your blog. I always recommend one so new visitors to your blog can get to know you a little and understand what topics you write about then decide if to follow or not 😊
Can see you’ve already made use of some widgets too which is great!
Happy blogging – Rosie
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Thank you so much, Rosie! I will fix that soon 😁
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Hey there, I’m intrigued by your blog already! You have a really creative title that catches the eye and makes readers curious to know more. You might want to add an about page, as readers often like to know more about the person behind the blog, as cheesy as that sounds. 😀 Happy blogging!
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I agree–love the captivating title and am curious to see how your journey has and will continue to unfold. Perhaps incorrectly, I’ve always held the presumption that engineers have an easy time finding work… so I’m deeply curious as to why you’re unemployed. Is it by choice? Is it the “need experience to gain experience” rut? Or something else entirely? This would be a great question to answer, either in an About page or across the life of your blog. Very intriguing!
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The name of your blog itself is captivating. Love your first post. Looking forward to your work:)
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I loved your post! It’s definitely relatable to most people, and I can really hear your voice in your writing! You’re doing an awesome job 🙂
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Loved it!!! Nice work 👍❤️
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I’m new as blogger. I hope you like my blog. Comment please
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Loved your post! I left a comment & like!
I noticed you don’t have an “ about” page on your blog which you might want to add to introduce yourself &/or your blog to your new visitors ☺️
Happy blogging! Rosie
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Now check my blog
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I did check your blog. Your welcome btw! Manners don’t cost a penny 😊
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Thank you for guiding 😊
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Yeh..it’s Friday – at long last!
I started posting short stories and the occasional poem within the past few weeks. This is my first experience with blogging or posting anything online. I had some lovely comments last week and some great advice on making it easy to navigate my site. Before it was just a long reel of stories. Now I have a static page and when you press the widget menu all my posts appear under main categories.
Crushed Caramel is the name of my site. Crushed Caramel (Leaner at Love) and the site contains lessons Caramel has had to learn.
It seems readers so far have liked “Peanut-Butter Cookies” the most. Also “Wonderful Wisteria” and “Lime & Lemongrass My Way Through This Summer”. My own favourite is my poem “River”…although I have to admit poetry is definitely not my strength!
I hope you enjoy laughing at Caramel https://crushedcaramel.wordpress.com/
I am glad of any advice and tips, because this is all new to me.
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Lovely blog! I hav got to admit yoir blog name made my mouth water! Interesting and positive writing! Love your poem river.
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Thank you Sheer Ladybird. I love receiving comments. It is soooooo encouraging! Just had a look at your site. I admire so much the beautiful photos on your site and so many others I have seen. I know that is something mine is missing terribly. I have just begun of course and am not very arty at all, but it is such an inspiration to see other sites and realize how attractive and appealing you can make a site.
Crushed Caramel…without giving too much away…Caramel has had to overcome a big challenge. She has been crushed and is rebuilding her life with all support and love and advice from family and friends. All the lessons in life she has been taught are helping her to rebuild her life. There will be tiny references to the event that has overturned her life, but this site is going to be about surviving, thriving and making life wonderful again.
Thank you for your kind comment. Hope you have a lovely day.
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Loved ‘Not on the Same Page’. I write short stories as well, and you have perfectly captures your protagonist’s self doubt here. Great work!
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Thank you for your encouragement. I appreciate your kind comments. I have just been reading some of your posts. Your stories are very captivating. You seem to have had a lot of success with writing.
I was a bit nervous about “Not On The Same Page”. I wrote it because of sentiments inside that I had to express and it all came out a bit higgledy piggledy.
I know I have a lot of improvements to make, but I am glad of all the support and feedback.
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On the contrary, I thought it was well-structured and very engaging! I’ve followed!
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What a wonderful blog, I look forward to reading more! One thing I noticed was that there’s not an option to leave a comment on a post. Is that intentional? It’s nice to be able to comment if you’ve enjoyed a post 🙂
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Thank you for your lovely comment. I had not realized. I am slowly noticing all the options for different widgets and themes. I will see if I can figure out how to make that change.
Very grateful for all the tips and kind comments. I am sorry it all looks so amateurish. I will keep trying to learn how I can present the stories I have written to make them look a bit more appealing.
I love your travel blog. Such glorious locations are featured. Thank you for sharing these amazing places with us.
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I have just had a look at some of the posts on my site. Some have a box right at the bottom of the page for readers/visitors to leave a reply. Whereas the box is not included in some posts. I don’t know why that is, but I will try to figure out what I can change it. I love feedback.
Thank you for making me aware of it.
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Yo, yo! This is EJ. Check out my website all about depression. Guaranteed to make you laugh and cry!
https://lifeisfightlif.wordpress.com
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Hi there EJ, I noticed your blog is private, is that intentional?
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Thanks for the head up!
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Hello everyone.
I just started this journey a month ago and it has been beautiful so far. Here’s my first post.
I hope you enjoy reading 🙂
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I really like your writing style in your posts! Very captivating!
I noticed you don’t have anything written in your “about” page, this would be useful to add to. Otherwise your blog looks fab ☺️
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Sure. 🙂 Thanks a lot for the advice and the feedback. Really means a lot.
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Lovely start 🖤
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Hey everyone! My first post focuses on normalized conflicts to attain a life worth living. In the future, I see myself blogging short stories, quirky stories, and even some poetry. Your feedback would be great, feel no hesitation to be honest 🙂
I plan to post every Saturday at noon, so if your interested, come back to my blog for more, and I will do the same for you! Writing has always seem like an academic restricted skill, and I’m glad that I get to join a community that emphasizes freedom in creativity.
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Good writing 🙂
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Thank you!
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I am in a rush too work, I had a glance at your blog and love it! Following you and will visit back later to have a more thorough read 🙂
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Awesome, thank you so much!
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I enjoyed your blog…Intentions of Kiki is a great title. I found your about page good, but am wondering, as you write more blogs and people have plenty of material to look through that you may want to shorten the “about” part, which may encourage people to dig deeper into some of your other posts. Your blog definitely has a nice flow to it and is leaps ahead of mine in that aspect!
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Oh also you may want to add a follow button on your page that people can click! I had to find you on wordpress platform to follow and didn’t see one on your page.
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Great advice! Thank you!
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I really enjoy your writing style….it’s very honest, both with softness and a bit of bluntness. Great job! Keep writing! 🙂
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Thank you for taking the time to read my post!
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Powerful start, but I couldn’t find a follow button!
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Hello all new bloggers, I hope you all are having an amazing day.
As a new blogger always remember 3 things –
Be positive
Never leave hope
Be open to positive criticism.
ALWAYS BE POSITIVE.
LOVE P.G
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This is my first blog post! Just a small introduction
https://beautyinthebutterflies.blog/2018/05/18/hello-beautiful-💜/
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Hey Cassie! You’ve got a lovely first post up there. Perfect for an introduction:)
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Thank you so much!
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I love how the colors just pop on your blog! 🙂
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Thank you! I love making things really bright!
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The name of you blog goes well with the colors and “vibe” of your page. Are you able to add a follow button I had to go to the wordpress platform to follow and could not find a way to on your blog.
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Thank you so much for pointing this out! I completely forgot that I didnt have one!
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Love your blog! The colors and vibe on your page is great! Your photos are lovely too, great quality! ☺️
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Hello Bloggers, I am excited to read some of your great posts. This community helped me a lot. Just mention your URL below and I will take a look at them.
Happy Blogging ❤
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Hy this is the link to my blog please kindly check it out. Thank you
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I really like the look that you achieved with simple checkered shirt. Cool blog with cool stuffs. Looking forward for more 🙂
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Awwww I am so grateful. Thank you so much for taking out time to check out my blog
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It’s my pleasure ☺️
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Hey!!
I’d be glad if you check out my blog and would really appreciate if you’d leave a feedback.
http://liveathi.wordpress.com
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Your first post shows your strong views and I really liked the way you portrait it. Look and feel of the blog is on point as well. Looking forward to read more. All the best 🙂
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Hi, kindly have a look and possibly read my posts..thanks for extending helpful hand..
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I really like the way you write. The posts can be related and speaks to all in volumes. I commented on your posts and definitely looking forward for more. 🙂
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Thank-you, appreciate your time and take on my blogs… 💐
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It’s my pleasure. Do feel free to check out my blog and give me feedback too 🙂
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Yes sure, I would love to read your blog soon 👍
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Hi, here’s my blog. https://presentalle.wordpress.com/
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Hopefully this content doesn’t break any rules.
https://lifeisfightlif.wordpress.com/2018/05/17/shityeah/
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Hi guys looking forward to meeting new bloggers. Hope you guys like my new post. So check it out. https://thinkingclearly483645316.wordpress.com/2018/05/17/poles-apart/ . I’m waiting to know what you think about it.😊
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Hi!
I had a look at your post and blog in general. Looks good!!
I was wondering why you have such a big menu on your page? Are those you favourite posts? Maybe you could use a dropdown for that (like you did with ‘poems’? Just an idea!
Happy blogging 🙂
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Oh that! That was a mistake, I was just redesigning my blog and that accidentally happened, then I was too lazy to change it. I’ll change that soon. 😊
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hahaha fair enough! 😀
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😁
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I enjoyed your Poem. Your page as a nice feel to it and once you change the menu title I think your pretty good to go there. I like that you now have a good amount of material…It could be just me but I usually like to read a couple poems at a time so it’s good that people can browse!
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I have no idea what a menu title is 😊
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Probably not the correct use of words. Menu Ribbon or drop down at the top of your page, is what I was getting at where every single poem pops up. It still works now, but once you have like a hundred it may be overwhelming 🙂
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Your blog looks good! You may get told not to post on here anymore as your blogs older than a month so to use the community pool but otherwise here’s my feedback!
I agree with Nina your menu seems too long but I saw your going to change it.😊
Also when scrolling through your Home back it appears very black & white to me, would love to see some pictures if you have any to add as a featured image to your posts to make them pop a bit on your home page maybe?
Otherwise doing great! ☺️
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Thank you for checking out and I’ll definitely keep the advice in my mind.😊
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https://everythinginappropriate.wordpress.com/2018/05/17/an-inappropriate-relationship/
– Still learning how to use this but here’s a link to my first post which was published last night.
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Hi there!
Good start!
Maybe as an advice, it might be nice to add an ‘about’ page with a bit more who you are and why you age having this blog.
And, but that’s more an optical thing, when you post then there is a ‘featured image’ option. Then, for example, people already can see the liquid picture challenge on the front page. Usually posts with pics attract more visitors 🙂
Have a good one!
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Hey Daniel, thank u for writing to me. I have just started yesterday evening and still trying to learn how to get around things. Looking forward to all the love and support
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Of course! A well maintained blog will be part of you and everyone is always learning something new and after time all will look better and when you reflect you can see your own progress in your own blog! That’s always nice to see 😉
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I love the story. And the way you described it:)
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Hey Richa. Thank u for ur love… I have another part to this story which will be up soon.
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Would love to read it too.
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I am new, just started this month. Thank you for the opportunity to share.
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Your posts are so heartfelt and touching! You truly write straight from the heart to the reader.
If I may make a suggestion, you could perhaps shorten your posts on the home page to extracts so that the page doesn’t get too long, and it makes it easier for the reader to scroll and see the headlines.
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Thank you, as soon as I figure out how to do that I will. I am still learning how to work this site. I am new to blogging.
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Hi…. It indeed very beautifully written…
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Great start, but I couldn’t find a follow button!
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I am unsure about this, when I visit other’s sites the follow option pops up on the bottom right as I scroll through their page. I had assumed the same happened on mine. Thank you for making me aware of this, I will look into it.
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Thank you again for making me aware, I discovered the customize area and added a follow widget
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Lisperspective.wordpress.com
This is my page & my first blog, check it out. Isn’t so much the start of a blog. More of an introduction to my main focuses throughout my blog
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Your link didn’t work for some reason 😔
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Hello people, please i’m new to this space, kindly visit my blog and show some love. This is the link to one of my posts; https://marviesspace.wordpress.com/2018/04/28/homecoming/
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Your blog looks good!
Would be nice to see some pictures, maybe add a featured image to your posts?
Also on your Home page some bloggers prefer to have there post shown as an excerpt so there Home page isn’t full of writing and makes it easier for new visitors to see what posts you’ve written? That’s a personal preference though and you clearly have a lot of followers already 😊
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I am a brand new aspiring blogger. Started writing a couple of days ago. I hope everyone will be kind enough to give my first blog a read.
http://www.foodiefreakk.wordpress.com
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Hooray! Another food blogger! 😀 Followed you and looking forward to more posts and learning more about the Bengali food culture!
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Means a lot to me. Thank you so much.
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I’m a foodie and everything related to food is always welcomed by me. Nice blog I really liked it.😊
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Thank you so much. ❤
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Hi!
This first post would make a good ‘about’ page as it will be on the bottom very soon when you start blogging! And on the homepage is a whole black nothing, which you easily can fill up with an image. When you go to customizer then you can see the option automatically to add any picture to your liking that matches what you want to do with the blog
Have fun!
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Thank you so much for your lovely suggestion. 💜
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Thank you for suggestion
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Hi out there! Bengali food culture really sound interesting. Let’s connect then ! I am currently translating Greek recipes 🤓
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Would love to. 💜
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Great start! 🙂
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Hey everyone! I just launched my blog and have been playing around with it. I finally feel semi-satisfied with it. It’s still a work in progress. So far I’ve been trying to get my pages up and running. I have a few draft posts I’m working on but write now I’m blogging about my fitness programs. Let me know what you think of the site. I want to make sure it’s user friendly and navigateble.
https://getinshapewithshaun.wordpress.com
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I really liked your blog.
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Thank you!! I’ll be sure to check out yours!
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Hi!
Yes, still work in progress such as the T25 page 😉
I understand from your blog that you are very proud of the progress you made. Maybe you can change the menu item ‘progress’ into ‘my progress’ or ‘what I do’ as, so I assume, you are doing those things, T25 and all, right?
And, lastly, you do have a nice smile, just, the background is ‘noisy’ which takes the attention away from you 😉
Good luck!
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I definitely will change my menu name to “my progress.” Thanks for the suggestion. I’ve been playing around with menu names for quite some time. Are you refferring to the background photo in my about page? Is it too big? I can change that so that it’s more user friendly. Or are you reffering to the color scheme background in general?
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I don’t know what’s behind your hair! 😂😂 That drags the attention away from you! That’s what I mean 😉 The size of the picture is debatable, on the one hand a large sized pic can be okay, just, consider the purpose of the about page and if the picture meets or blends in that purpose?
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Oh ok!! Haha leaves! It was taken in the fall. I may change the size. I didn’t realize how large it was when I put it on there. I’m still trying to establish myself. I need to get more “fitness” related pictures. It’s hard when I’ve been doing this on my own for so long.
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Hey Shaun, I followed you because I am a fitness addict as well and I also am studying nutrition because I want to be a personal trainer. Check out my page. Your blog looks good! have fun blogging 🙂
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Will do!! Thanks for taking the time! I’m glad to see you studying nutrition. I may share some posts from your because I’m still learning about nutrition as well.
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Sounds good if you do share I will be delighted. Thank you for reading me 😊 cannot wait to read your articles
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Hi Shaun! First congrats on getting in shape. Regular exercise does so many amazing things for us, so you should have little problems with material that people will be interested in. Your page was easy to navigate and I think if you can get people interested in your material you’ve got a good thing going.
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Thanks! I’m really looking forward it. I feel like I have so many questions to answer.
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Looks good, glad to see you have a menu set already!
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Hey I follow your blog. I am a fan of fitness and it’s a really nice blog.
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thanks!! I’m glad to have a fan! If you have any suggestions or want me to post about something let me know. I want to be a source of inspiration!
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https://lushrevovery.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/the-journey-begins/
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I love your blog layout!
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Cool
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Hello bloggers! I’m new to blogging and WordPress. I’d really appreciate if you would take out some time and review my first post. I love to write poems. And would love to learn and improve myself.
https://fictivefinesseff.wordpress.com/2018/05/15/the-paths-of-amity/
Cheers!
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Hey Rachel. Your way of portraying the feelings in the poem was really good. And an excellent choice of words as well.
Do check out my new post as well. http://thehonestfabler.com/demented/
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That’s a beautiful poem. Keep writing:)
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Thank you for taking out time to read it…I would appreciate it if you continued to give helpful tips and feedback on how to write better next time. In fact, I recently uploaded another post and would like t if you took some time out to check that out as well
https://fictivefinesseff.wordpress.com/2018/05/18/on-the-winding-lane/
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Welcome Rachel! But I’m fairly new to be able to help you with writing. Besides, I loved your latest poetry. Left you a comment too.
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Thanks again!
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Lovely piece here Rachel! Left you a comment!
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Thank you! Your blog is quite interesting as well…I recently posted another poem and would like it if you could check it out-
https://fictivefinesseff.wordpress.com/2018/05/18/on-the-winding-lane/
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Hello Everyone,
This is my first blog post on my new site I created for my upcoming business. Check it out and share your thoughts.
https://blazintrailsvc.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/marijuana-dui-how-is-intoxication-determined/
Thanks!
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nice layout
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Good morning First Friday Bloggers. I am a former alcoholic of 28 years who suddenly understood myself & my addiction 4 years ago and become suddenly, easily free! I love the word ‘free’! My blog is for those who are still struggling, trapped in thier innocently faulty thinking and unhelpful social conditioning. I am going to make a difference! I will take a look at everyone else’s later today. Have a happy, peaceful day.x
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Great start! Thanks for sharing 🙂
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I love that you’re using what you’ve learnt to help others that are going through what you did! Awesome blog 😀
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Hello Peeps, we are a community trying to bring inspirations together from different people. Here’s the link to our first post and yes, you too can be an Inspiranger by sharing your inspiration to the world. Words do have power which a sword hasn’t. Be a part of the change. BE AN INSPIRANGER!
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Hi! I really liked your blog. It was a nice read and I’m looking forward to more such posts…:)
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This is my first blog – http://www.justebbything.com I’ve just graduated from university 🙂
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Such a cute dog! 🙂
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Nice blog! so girly I love it 🙂 congrats on your graduation!
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Hi everyone. This is my first post on my blog and its going to be about movies because, well I love to see good movies. There’ll be very cool recommendations to save the stress of finding good movies for a movie night. Its still work in progress but I want your thoughts about it.
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Hey there, I followed you, who doesn’t love movies? I hope to get all the news through your blog 😉
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Hi thanks so much. And.. yeah, I’ll try to bring good stuff for your entertainment😀
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Sweet !! 😜
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Hi, I thought this was a lovely first post. It was well written and really interesting. I left you a comment.
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definitely a follower i’m a sucker for movies naija especially
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Wow! How did you get 387 followers with one post? 😮
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By the way, I wanted to follow you on WordPress but couldn’t find the button. I don’t like getting email notifications.
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