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Hello all,I am a newbie here.Wrote my first blog about my travel to michigan. https://hdspeaks.wordpress.com/2016/06/01/first-blog-post/
Please check if you have got some time.would be loving to receive feedback
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Maybe use less pictures — though they are nice photos, they overwhelm the text part of your post because there are so many. You could also add a little more text to alter your photo/text balance, too! 🙂
Would you be willing to check out one of my posts? (Click on my name! 🙂 )
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Sure .I would love to read your posts .Thanks so much
for feedback.I will work upon it.:)
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I’ll follow you, and we can give each other feedback in the future, too! 🙂
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That sounds like it was a truly amazing trip! I do feel you perhaps did overdo it with the pictures however i wouldn’t say get rid of them you could perhaps have the bulk a the end and just one that are the most relevant in the main bit. I do like the way you broke it up and felt it was structured reasonably.well! 🙂
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Thanks a lot ! I will surely work on the things you mentioned 🙂
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Looks like my dream of teaching abroad is on hold for now. Do you think maybe this is a sign? Instead of “NYC Teacher Abroad” maybe I should be “NYC Teacher Stay at Home? ” Comments welcome…
A Dream Deferred – NYC Teacher Abroad
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Looking for feedback on a short piece of flash fiction. https://caroljforrester.com/2016/06/10/the-girl-across-the-street/
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Hi. I’m not begging for followers at all by making this comment. I only want followers who are truly interested in what I have to say, but I do want to ask your advice why people visit and like my posts but don’t follow. Do you see something wrong with my blog that I am missing?
https://shiningraindrops.com
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Some people may not follow because their Reader is already overflowing with posts they don’t have time to read. On the other hand, just because someone is a Follower, it doesn’t mean they actually read your posts. https://gracelead.co
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True. I really speak from my heart and because I am passionate about what I have to say so I want people to feel that in my posts. 🙂
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Additional images will break up the text and add more color — and color is a good thing! 🙂 If you have other posts on similar topics, link to them in the first post (i.e. if you write about fishing, for example, in two posts, link them together so interested readers will see both). There are many reasons why people don’t follow, so it’s hard to say what exactly they’re thinking.
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Thank you for the advice. Where is a good place to get pictures?
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You can ask your friends for permission to use theirs, or you can always take your own photos. I use the website Flickr, and search for photos licensed under Creative Commons (this means I can use them for free, as long as I give credit to the photographer).
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Hi, I just had a read of your latest blog. I can definitely feel your passion and sincerity in your writing! Similar to previous comments, I suggest that you break up your writing into sections using headings. And ask questions to your readers at the end of post to drive engagement. Good luck!
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Thank you. That is very helpful advice.
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No problem!
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From personal experience, I sometimes like posts but don’t follow because those individual posts resonate with me but perhaps the blog topic as a whole isn’t something I’m interested in. So maybe that’s one reason why. But don’t feel disheartened by it. Just focus on writing what you’re genuinely passionate about and engaging with other bloggers who’s stuff you like. You will eventually find a community of like minded people who are interested in your blog. Also, I think it’s better to have a few really dedicated followers rather than a bunch who aren’t really engaged with your blog 🙂
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Thank you very much for your encouragement. I guess its because I so passionately want to help as much of the world as I can touch discover true health through my writing. When you know you have something amazing to offer and the world in general does not realize it, it can be frustrating. I know it takes time and patience though. 🙂
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Anyone interested in checking my blog out and giving feedback? I am aware its a bit been there done that however i love writing and i will start coming up with more original ideas …. I hope… Anyway, I only started the other day as well. i am also looking for someone who can possibly give me tips on getting better at it . Thanks 🙂
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One good thing to do: proofread for grammar before posting. Little things like capitalizing “I” and proper spelling make people take your writing more seriously. 🙂 You can also add pictures to your posts to add more color!
Would you be willing to look at one of my posts?
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Capitalising I is the thing ‘i’ probably forget to do the most if I am honest. You want me to look at a particular one or just any of them?
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You can pick! 🙂
I took creative writing courses in college, and one of the first things my professor said was that writers who pay attention to grammar will always do better than those who don’t. I can’t say for sure if he was right, but it seems like good advice! 🙂
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I believe it’s good advice although my grammar isn’t perfect i prefer reading something with good grammar because it is like the person cared enough to put in the effort. Your post seem really down to earth, seriously there’s not enough people that do those sorts of posts, it’s refreshing to see it’s interesting and it’s quite original.
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Thank you! 🙂 I’ll follow you to stay up to date on your new posts — and check your grammar 😉 I look forward to seeing more from you!
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I’m definitely going to keep up to date on your posts. Thanks 🙂
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Really great blog!
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If I were you, I might change your blog’s theme. Right now it doesn’t really lend well to the type of content you’re putting out. Try finding a theme where the posts are all visible, instead of one where you need to click boxes to get to your actual content. I hope that made sense. If you want help, I’d be more than happy to point you in the direction of some great themes.
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It totally made sense. What themes would you say are good?
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Ecto, Baskerville, Hew, Suits, and Highwind are just a couple that I think look pretty good 🙂
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Thank you! I will try them out !
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Do you have cats? Do you ever think about what they think about like what they’re lives were like before you brought them home? I did one night, and wrote a poem about it. This weeks poem is “A Question for My Cats.” Included is a photo of my little pride. Stop by and check it out. Please leave any likes/comments/feedback on the post page. Thanks in advance for reading.
Drew
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I am turning 30 in September, and last year I wrote a list of 30 things I wanted to do before my birthday. I have to say, I haven’t been very successful achieving all those goals I wrote down, but I am in the quest! One of my goals was to write 150 posts in my blog. I am way behind, but still would like to share it with all of you and it would be incredibly encouraging to hear your thoughts and ideas. Hope you stop by!
http://www.theperfectfitproject.wordpress.com
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Hey Monica ! Hi five , even I was born on September , but won’t be turning 30 instead will be 18 😉 … Anyways loved you blog , will be following it , hope to read more of your posts .
-Ism
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Thanks! Would love to hear your comments 🙂
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Hey guys! I’ve been trying to work on a weekly basis on my books blog, here’s the latest post so you can read it.
I would really appreciate any comment on the style, or book selection
Thanks!
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I replied on your post, I discovered a little typo, you wrote scape instead of escape I think 😛
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thanks a lot! will fix it right away
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Hi everyone,
I’ve finally managed to post my May favourites today and would greatly appreciate you checking it out. Feedback is always welcome on my blog, especially regarding my writing style, layout, and topic choices.
https://coffeeshopdreams.wordpress.com/2016/06/13/may-favourites/
Thank you and happy blogging 🙂
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That is an absolutely brilliant idea! sharing your favourites of the month, it’s golden! And i really like your writing style!
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Thank you so much! I love watching people on YouTube talk about their monthly favourites, so I thought it would be a nice edition to my blog 🙂
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Just out of curiosity which YouTubers post about their monthly favourites? i’d love to check them out!
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Pretty much all beauty related YouTubers. The most popular are zoella, Tanya Burr etc …however, if you just type in ‘May favourites’ then I’m sure you’ll be spoilt for choice haha
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Thanks! i will most defo check them out!
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I am new to blogging ( 2 days in) and I would appreciate any constructive feedback. Thanks
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If you’re new you can post a link from your first post here: https://wordpress.com/dailypost/2016/05/06/welcome-to-first-friday/ Good luck with your blog!!! 🙂
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If you have any specific questions or things you’re unsure about, let us know! You’ll get more helpful feedback that way.
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Hello All, all our Blog~Azine Le Amusant, just started a new page Everyday Stories to inspire readers with that little strength we look out for each day. Check out our latest post Real People Real Stories and live your feedback and comment. Thank you.
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I’m sorry about the spell error. I wish I would know how to go back and edit.
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I would really appreciate some feedback on my writing. I am currently working on a piece that is broken into manageable shorts, with the intent to merge all together at some point in the future. Please let me know your thoughts: https://griefsite.wordpress.com/2016/06/08/5114-days-the-dividing/?preview=true
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Shannon, I commented on your site, I hope that is okay.
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That is good it has so much emotion. It’s absolutely beautiful and insightful.
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Thanks!
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Check out my blog?
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I absolutely will. 😊
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Thanks!
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Hello All! I am a second time new blogger. Okay in other words and to make more sense I started with Word Press in 2013 and without much time wrote two blogs that I thought were pages and then in May 2016 wrote a new page. All related and intended to help me grow in my business relationships and to also be a blessing to those that may need extra help in my area of expertise. I am not trying to promote but really do need to be a part of a community that can help me learn. I wish I knew of First Friday in 2013 but am just beginning again so here I am in the Community Pool and need help so I don’t sink too far. Here is my link. I would love feedback and plan to spend some time with the Tutorials and all of you here in the Pool. Thanks in advance.
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Hey guys, I am new to blogging and I would love some feedback on my site. I cover a variety of topics ranging from movies&TV, literature, video games and poetry. Please check out my site and tell me what you think.
https://thenightshiftguy.wordpress.com/
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I like it, it the theme seems to compliment the content. My only suggestion is to perhaps add more images to break up the text a little bit more but other than that i thought it was fine!
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hey!
wrote this just now on the shouting last night.
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Hello all,
I’m an avid reader, creative writer, nature lover and tea sipper that takes photos and paints them in words.
Feel free to check out my blog “Painted in words” if you are interested in nature photography, prose, poetry, reading and bullet journaling:
https://nashrahs.wordpress.com
Thanks,
Nashrah
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Hi! I’m a ballet dancer and a foodie. I write real stories of dancing in the rehearsals, to dancing/costumes/make-up in the performances. I also include some food recipes that keeps me fueled. Wheat, rice, and oats give me eczema, so all my delicious recipes are free of those! Hope you comment, follow, etc. I can check out your blog:)
https://fondufondue.com/
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really sweet blog! two of my favourite things…food and ballet!
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Thanks! Two of my favorite things as well;)
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I originally thought this seems like a bizarre combination but somehow you have made me interesting and it’s surprisingly good content! I think it’s great!
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Thanks! I can inspire lots of people…. The dancers and the foodies:)
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Hey, I’ve written my latest post on how to plan your week more efficiently! I’ve borrowed the Agile technique, which is what all the large tech companies use. This is the first time I’m offering bonus content with my post too. My goal is to gain more subscribers so I’d appreciate any feedback on why you would or wouldn’t subscribe to my blog 🙂 thanks!
http://www.tinaparkblog.com
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Your writing is well structured, in depth but not a load of ramble, well explained, you express your opinions and your writing is interesting and it connects with the read whilst being informing.
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WOAH. I love this! I’m super disorganized and have post it notes EVERYWHERE, I like your idea of putting them on a day of the week 🙂 great post!
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Hey, thank you so much for your lovely and constructive feedback – really appreciate it! Can I ask: would you subscribe to my blog? Why or why not? I’m focusing on growing my mailing list at the moment. Thanks!
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Hilarious! I had to share. It’s so true, anytime anyone opens their mouth! I also left a comment.
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Thanks, I truly appreciate your feedback and kind comments Donna.
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Hey bookworms of wodpress! I posted a new book review for City of Ashes. For those of you who haven’t read it or for those of you have take a peek and let me know what you think 😉
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Hey all!
My name is Wolfcalls, I write rhymed verse poetry! I’m not very experienced, and so I welcome your feedback so I can know where I can improve (yes, I know it’s a really long poem…) Thank you!!!! XD https://nightwhisperswolfblog.wordpress.com/
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Wow… that is just wow. That was literally really emotional and i have like tears in my eyes. You have a real talent their. I have nothing else to say other than it was great!
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thank you, totallylifesblog!
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It’s cool i was just being honest it was just amazing like all your over posts, they’re just great!
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Aw, thank you!!! 😺
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I checked out your post. It was really good! Blessings to you!
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Thank you, and thank you for your kind words on my post!…Right back at ya 🙂
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New post on my blog https://smalltownfashionblogger.wordpress.com/2016/06/12/about-love-and-trust/
Check it out and leave some feedback 😉
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Curious about semantics for two part posts? All my posts tend to run ‘long’ for blogs at 1200 to 2000 count. I’ve never considered breaking any up before but the piece I just finished in rough draft form ended up about 500o, a proper long essay/short nonfiction story clocking in at 9 typed pages. Have people had success with multi-post pieces? What’s the best way to handle it? Thanks!
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I’ve never split up posts but have a blogging friend who will have Part 1, 2, 3 in three successive weeks and I think her readers enjoy the anticipation. I know I do.
Also, on your breaking up with fb post, I like your personifying of the site moving in, bringing its toothbrush, and clearing out a drawer. Your writing is engaging and you definitely have style.
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Thank you so much for the kind words on my style. I broke the piece into 2 parts where there seemed a break that also might leave an anticipation. I’m going to try scheduling them a week apart. We’ll see how it goes, fingers crossed and all. It’s all one big experiment anyway.
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Hi again! I can’t see the post I posted for not so long ago here.. Can anyone see it?
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Hi, Roberta — your comment has been held in moderation because it contains so many links; comments with that many links are frequently spam, so they get help in the spam queue. I’d recommending sharing a specific post that you have particular questions or would like specific feedback on; your comment will be published, and you’re more likely to get a helpful response! This is a space for folks looking for feedback, and we do ask that you not use it simply to share new links/links to every post you publish. That way, it stays focused and helpful, and everyone can get the help they’re looking for.
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Okay. I understand and I didn’t know that. I’m quite new here and maybe I misunderstood the rules here. I have seen others publishing more than one link and thought therefor that it was allowed. Thank you for letting me know.
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Hi guys, my name is Sheila. I was shocked when I heard about the Orlando shooting, and I had to share my thoughts. It is very hard to write about something that left you quite speechless.
https://agirlspathtohappiness.wordpress.com/2016/06/13/orlando-shooting-tribute-to-orlando-victims/
Please, check out my post and help me spread the love, support, and sympathy.
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Hi to all.
Absolute novice here, total dinosaur if the truth be known… Hoping to be able to reach out to those that need a kindred spirit. Any guidance and feedback would be appreciated… Thanks in advance.
http://victornotvictimblog.wordpress.com/
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hello i visited your blog, and its obvious you just got here i welcome you to this community and hope you enjoy it i suggest you start posting blog post or add a about page of a small description of who you are if its okay with you, and am here for any support you may need! i love the short note i read on your blog and my heart goes out to you xx
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Thanks FofoFl’or, means a lot, I will have a look at what you suggest and have a go at setting the “about” page up later in the day. I may be taking you up on your offer of support sooner rather than later, haha
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you are welcome anytime xx
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I read your blog and first must say Bravo! for not letting him take your life from you. On a blogging note, Word Press has a two week “Blogging University” for free. I’m on day six and seem to be learning quite a bit. Best wishes to you. Your strength is encouraging!
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Thanks Owning a dog with anxiety, means a lot, I will definitely check the B/U out, I so need as much help with all this as I can get.. haha. x
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I think people do spend to much time worry about things they have no control over, you made a very good point! And those songs you mentioned ❤ they're great. I really liked the post!
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i agree whole heartly. need to enjoy life more. most things work out on there on. sometimes we need to bring the shovel the mountain will not move on its own. but i feel the way u do … worrring will not make it better acturally it makes it worse. BREATHE 🙂 blessings all
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Hello everyone, i have some poetry on my blog and would like to hear what you think as well as if its just reading, i also post things about my experiences as a medical student and what it’s like to work in a hospital here is the link to my blog thank you
https://hushhspeaksoflty.wordpress.com
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Heck to the yes.A decent blog about sports!
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Haha awesome! my page is your page so feel free to share/comment on whatever you like!
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