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Hi Friends!
Its exam time in India and I thought of writing an article on exam stress and what we as parents can do to overcome this stress in kids.
PLS PLS… Do give my article a gentle read and share feedback. This will help me to improve my writing skills 🙂
Vaishali
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This resonates with me also. We are also preparing for 11 plus in our house. I would also encourage parents to keep an ongoing dialogue with the school. They go through this process year after year and I have also found othe mums to be very supportive. I hope this helps.Thanks. Natalie
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Oh! Yes..Absolutely. Thanks for finding the post useful 🙂
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i love community pool!!!
anyway, my name is wolfcalls and i write poetry, and i’d love feedback. thanks!
https://nightwhisperswolfblog.wordpress.com/
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Hi – My question is regarding the Daily Prompt Pingback. I have been posting it at the end of my post. I have tried including it as a link, but that doesn’t work. What am I doing wrong?
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I always add it as a link. I don’t think it matters where in the body of the blog it is located matters. be sure and check the spelling. it has to be a https: not http:
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I have copied it exactly and then inserted as the link in Daily Prompt but it doesn’t work. So, I have been just typing it out at the bottom of my post and I noticed that others are not.
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wow..sounds like a problem for the techies then. have you been clearing your cashe? there have been glitches when people don’t clear it enough. worth a try
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Thanks for always being responsive!
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I see a pingback on the Screen prompt, but it leads to a deleted post on your blog. So I’m not sure what happened there?
There’s also a pingback on a more recent prompt that works properly — though, on the post itself, it seems like you’ve entered some of the HTML code in the Visual Editor, since I can see some angled brackets that normally belong in the HTML Editor. So it seems like your pingbacks generally work, but perhaps you want to make sure you paste the prompt URL into the correct editor, so that it renders properly. Let us know if you encounter any other issues with this!
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Yes. It only works when I post in in the post itself. I guess I need the Blogging University course. :0)
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Hello everyone!! I hope you’re well..
Today I wish to share my latest write up… A really short one… Do read and review. Thank you! 🙂 https://daggersandhearts.wordpress.com/2016/03/07/love-makes-all-things-better/
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Hi! As short as it is, it’s so poignant and truthful. Very refreshing. If you haven’t already, joining and using Twitter might be a good idea to share these short snippets of awesome. Well done!
Loony
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Aww! Thank you very much!! 😀 and yes, I am on Twitter, but I don’t use it much, I probably should…
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No worries! Do whatever suits you 🙂
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Very nice short post – but I also really liked your blog’s design, and how the home page lays out the posts,each with a feature pic in a nice, easy-to-view matrix.
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Thank you very much, Laura. 😀
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Heyo 🙂 I have a writing blog and I don have many things on it but I would love it so so so much if you would just check out what I have so far. Here´s the link: https://skootzblog.wordpress.com/
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I really liked your blog, your poems were great and from the heart! Much luck, xx missspe
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I love your blog! That poem Angel.. It will stay with me forever. Please write more.
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Hello everyone 🙂 I got 180 visitors to my blog in my first month. I’m wondering… is that good, average or below average? Any feedback you can give me on my blog would be hugely appreciated.
http://www.ramblingofanarcissist.wordpress.com
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I don’t know what it is about your blog but I like it, maybe it’s because you sound like the voice in my head?
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Hi Sean,
I wouldn’t worry about the numbers at this stage. Just focus on writing fresh/original content. As Kevin Costner said in Field of Dreams – If you build it, they will come! Look for increases in traffic month on month – that’s usually a good barometer. Many bloggers use tricks to boost their stats. But for long term success and building a tight community, just focus on the content and optimising it for keywords for now.
Best of luck,
Aidan
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Hello everyone, I’ve been writing for awhile but just recently started a blog and have been keeping it going. If you have a moment please stop and check out my blog, feedback is appreciated
sweetteaandsun.wordpress.com
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Hi Missspe,
I love the header of your blog! The layout is very nice. Big fan of the theme. I read your apple watch review post. Couple of suggestions – Using Bold/Italics and changing the point size of your questions can help break up longer passages of text and make it more readable.
Nothing wrong with the content you’ve written.
Your menu heading has only ‘About Me’. That’s cool but I’m sure you’ll add a few more tabs over time. For example, I have Archives for easy access, Books, Contact Me among others. Ultimately the more pages you have on your website (that are optimised around keywords), the better your chances of being found online in search engines.
Best of luck,
Aidan
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Hi all,
This week I deviated from relationships (sort of) & wrote a post about what comes after the honeymoon period with puppies 😉 http://howtoplayhouse.com/2016/03/03/puppyhood/
Always happy for feedback & discovering other writers.
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Hahaha I can relate from my dog Maggie when she was little. It’s funny because I just did a blog post about her! Lol
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Hey guys I write an inspirational blog 🙂 Please have a visit and leave your recommendations in the comments 🙂
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Hi! Please check out my latest post:
http://threemeangreens.com/2016/03/01/a-moms-dirty-little-secret/
Also, I’m interested in guest bloggers 🙂
I will return the favor and check out your site as well!
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I love love love your header and tagline! I love the look of the women haha I can sense your personality through just that!
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So I just started a blog yesterday but any advise would be so appreciated! If anyone would me to give them feedback for getting feedback from them I would be more then fine to do that! my blog is:
https://alltheplacesillgoblog.wordpress.com/
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It looks very nice so far. I love the name! (and Dr. Suess!)
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Thanks! I’m excited to see what will come of it.
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Wazzup people!
I have started my first blog and hope you can give me some tips! I write about music and randoms-hope you enjoy
keepwildinside.wordpress.com
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Hi All, what a fab idea. I’m new to blogging and trying to use a blog to help me to re-find my career path. Would love to hear your thoughts. I will return the favour. Thanks. Natalie
https://nharris1612.wordpress.com
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Hi Natalie,
You’re not the first to use blogging as a form of therapy or problem solver! I enjoyed your Fluffy Bunnies post. I confess it was the cocktails that drew me first.
I like your writing style which is very good. Can’t find much to fault.
Best of luck,
Aidan
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Hi! Would love to receive feedback on my flash fiction attempt; please check out https://thewriteproject.wordpress.com/2016/03/07/all-grown-up/ Thank you!
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Hi 🙂 I really like this! Effective and concise, which is a difficult thing to do well. Good work! I especially enjoyed your appropriation of the prompt – very creative.
🙂 Loony
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Thank you for this comment, Loony! I felt quite sad writing this story, but am also pleased with how it turned out. Looking forward to checking out your blog, too!
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It was well done! Thanks, I look forward to it as well 🙂
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I like to participate in the daily post where they give us a word to write about. I have no idea how to link it to the daily post. It says to link it but I can’t figure it out. Can someone help?
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copy the link address to the daily post subject. then use the add a link and paste it there. it should then ping back when the post is published.
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hey everyone I’ve just written a piece that is quite personal to me but I’ve written it in a more objective way so that I can analyse it properly. It’s basically about unrequited love and lust in general. I would love to hear some similar stories or thoughts on what I’ve written and if anybody feels the same way. I’ve also been fighting with my writing style so I’m hoping to be critiqued on that as well. I’m basically looking to connect with other bloggers and will be happy to give feedback on posts that you guys have written. Good luck and happy blogging 🙂
here’s a link to my post for anyone interested:
https://onlyindreamssite.wordpress.com/
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I felt a discord between the opening with lavender (though I thought it was lovely) and the meat of the latest post. Did lavender play a role later? They seemed like two different posts. It made for one long post that perhaps could have been a bit more concise. And yes, I think we’ve all fallen into lust with the idea of someone.
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Oh oops I may have messed up my metaphor there by trying to be too fancy. The lavender was supposed to represent taking something for yourself without letting it bloom naturally because of how it makes you feel like forcing something to happen without letting it happen naturally. Like trying to force a connection and an idea with someone because of how he makes you feel instead of letting him “bloom” naturally and appreciating him for what he is. I guess it wasn’t clear.
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Hi guys! Mine’s a photo blog for abandoned buildings. I’m trying to decide whether to use a static frontpage, and how exactly to go about designing it. Or, you know, I’m also pretty new to WordPress and would appreciate any critique. I’ll return the favor! Thanks!
http://www.peelingwalls.com
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I do like a bit of urbex. Really interesting blog, a lot of photography blog’s are set up the way your’s is with the tiled thumbnails that lead into the bigger article’s themselves. It doesn’t work on my site as I talk too much, but it certainly work’s with yours. I’d say if it ain’t broke don’t fix it.
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Thank you! I do like the single photo format as well, the descriptions you use on some of them are great. Really nice photos, too!
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Thank you.
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I think the theme you are using is a good one for a photo blog. i like the setup and ease f flow from one page to another. The photos are well done and the descriptions and information about them is too. I would add an “about me” page, but that’s just because I like to know who the person is behind the photos.
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I’ll make that about me page, thank you! I like your blog, it feels very conversational and you have had some interesting adventures. I like how you’ve paired photos with the writing, as well.
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Some amazingly eerie shots. How about a bit of blurb about the buildings? You’re very talented. Maybe a bit about you too. (This may have been there but I missed it so apologies if it was). Keep going! !!!! Well done. Natalie
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Thank you, I appreciate it! I have had some trouble tracking down a couple of places, but I haven’t dug very far with the intention of coming back to it. Your subjects are interesting and the way you write is very natural, and the only thing that would make navigation easier I think would be adding some categories. I did see your mobile layout too, and it’s very nice.
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oh yeah! and I like how your profile is in a sidebar as well! i’ll get to work on mine 🙂
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My latest post was, er, a little different to the norm. Funny? Weird? Incomprehensible?? What sayeth you, good people of the pool?
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weird? maybe……Funny? definitely! You made me laugh out loud and I (almost) snorted diet dr pepper out of my nose at one point….(note to self here, no drinking dp and reading this dude’s blog) Jason, once again you have accomplished a deep belly laugh. Keep up the good work! Suze
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Thanks Suze, that’s really kind and I’m glad you enjoyed it. Perhaps I should add a caution to future posts – warning, may cause nasal soda discharge. 🙂
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now that could only be a good thing…I mean what if someone that is happily misusing their courts system comes across your blog? The headlines would be snort-worthy too at that point and multiple lawsuits would be imminent! I can see it now “blog causes person to snort coke”! lol
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Hi everyone,
I’ve just made the big decision to change the layout and title of my blog from ‘Infinite Daydreamer’ to ‘coffee shop dreams’. My new post reveals the reasons behind this new change and even gives any new visitors an insight into what my blog is about.
I would greatly appreciate some feedback on my new post because this has been something I have been considering for a while.
https://coffeeshopdreams.wordpress.com/
Thank you 🙂
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love, love, love it!
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Thank you! That makes me so happy 🙂
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I totally approve of the title change! Quite catchy!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Hi everyone! I too just started my first ever blog and I’d really appreciate some feedback. The entire thing is still a tiny bit confusing to me 🙂
https://laenderlos.wordpress.com
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I liked your first two posts. I would complete that “about me” page even if it is to say “NO I am not telling you anything about me. It’s a secret!” People are drawn to those about me pages. I do like your style of writing.
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Hi Everyone I am new to this, I think I am doing ok. If you could spare a minute to visit my site it would be appreciated any feedback is welcomed of course
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Going well!! And of course thank you for my feedback. N
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Hello guys. New fashion blogger here – would love some feedback on my writing style and design. 🙂
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Does anyone else feel like they have to explain themselves to others? https://whenithoughtiwasfat.wordpress.com/2016/03/07/feeling-the-need-to-explain-yourself
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nope…but then I did when I was younger.
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You’re fine just how you are. A strong woman. Well done! Keep going. We all have our wobbles and confidence grows with experience rather than age I would say. ☺
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Hello,
My food blog is three-week-old and two of the friends are contributing to the blog too.
It’s on recipes; main focus is on Indian cuisines though I post various other cuisines that we make at home. I would certainly love if you drop by the blog and point the weak strings or the areas where I should improve or if I should add something. I’m open to all kinds of feedback, will love to hear from you.
Thanks
Sara, owner of http://foodeezjunction.com
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Can I have some feedback on my writing in this ( https://colinblogsite.wordpress.com/2016/03/04/bizarre-rites-of-passage/ ) article I wrote about Bizarre Rites of Passage? Thanks 😀
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maybe a sentence or two between the weird rites to make a connection, or to share a thought or two about them? or a picture to illustrate the strange rites? just a thought
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Thanks for the advice! 🙂
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Hi all! Would love some feedback on my latest piece in which Russians battle aliens in a shady back room…but it’s not what you think at all.
All comments welcome on the piece itself or in this thread. Thanks!
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That is pretty damn good, you have a very funny writing style.
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Thanks! If we can’t laugh at the absurdity of life, eh?
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Beautifully written and very, very funny. You have a new fan 🙂
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Hello everyone. I’m holding my nose and closing my eyes as I jump into this pool and I’m pretty sure I’m going straight into the deep end without the foggiest idea if I can even swim or not. What I’m trying to say is that I’m not sure if I should even be blogging. I’m sort of finding my way and my mojo so please be gentle and don’t dunk me under the water too much. Thank you xxx
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Beautiful tribute to your mum.
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Hi All, Please do check out my new born blog at http://kananmodi.wordpress.com. I’m really nervous about what I’m doing and could really use some feedback – on content, design, and anything else out of the ordinary!
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Your post had a lot of information in it. However, parts of it read like an essay for school. It’s lacking more of a personal connection between you and your audience. I also felt like your beginning was awkward (I know we all refer to posts as posts, but I avoid it if I can.) Try to start with a hook: an interesting story that ties into what you’re writing about). Good Luck!
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Thank you so much for your invaluable and honest feedback. Will ensure that this is incorporated from now on 🙂
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https://padmashreejaiswal.wordpress.com/2016/03/07/ginger-health-benefits/
plz like my post and waiting for your feedback.. And plz follow my blog
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I started my blog about a month ago, but I am starting to use it more. Advice please?
https://kirstymcevoy.wordpress.com/
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