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Decided to change up the layout of my page and wanted to see what you guys think! Also I posted a new blog this morning! Here it is!
Thanks for your time!
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I think the layout looks good – graphically it’s nice and clear, which is what I tend to like reading.
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Thanks I was going for a more clean look. Appreciate the feedback!
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While I don’t know what your old layout looked like, I do know that I like the clean and easy to navigate look of your current one. Nicely done!
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Thanks I felt my old layout was a bit harder to navigate so I’m glad you feel the way about this one ✌️ Thanks alot!
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Awesome! Yeah I cleaned it up a lil bit hoping to make it easier to find everything. I appreciate your feedback and your comment!
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Looks pretty good to me. I would suggest that you make your text color a bit darker to increase contrast with background… I like gray background though.
Also, if you can decrease size of that header that separates comment section… lots of unused space there.
If you have time, let me know what you think of design of my blog:
http://howtoaddict.com
(you can tell I’m fan of gray backgrounds, right? 🙂
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First of all, I’m a real big fan of your name ✌️and your design looks really professional. Thanks for the feedback I will consider altering the things you mentioned as I also had some doubts about it. Thanks alot!
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Initially I was thinking a lot on “Addict”… but settled on the fact that I like the world even though it can have negative connotation. Glad that someone else likes it 😉
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Do you like everyone’s comment? I think it’s a little strange lol. I’m not even talking to you and you like all of my comments.
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I do – especially here on Community Pool. If I don’t have much to add then instead of replying I like the comment… show appreciation for what person wrote + it’s mark for me which comments I’ve read 😉
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That’s great and all…but I’d really rather not have someone blow up my notifications with likes. You do it every week. It looks as if you are stalking my conversations–and even if you aren’t, unfortunately that is how it’s being perceived. Please consider this…thank you
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Layout looks great has this classy look to it.
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Wow thank you! Glad you feel that way 😊
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Looks great
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The new layout looks neat, i like it. I have also read and left a comment on your latest post.
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Thanks alot!
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Hi! I adore your layout! It’s simple and complimentary. Also, the blog is very straightforward and easy to navigate. Not sure if I could go vegan right away; I have a sensitive stomach and it would be something I work up toward. Thanks for sharing; your writing is great, too. 💫
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Yes I think it’s best to listen to your body and make small changes when you can if that’s more convenient for you. Thanks for your feedback on the layout! I’m glad you like it 😊
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You’re very welcome!! Happy blogging! 😃
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I love it! Thank you.
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Could be fun to try to be vegan for a week 😀👍
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💯 have an experience! My yoga teacher keeps telling me that’s what we’re all here for. Must be some truth in that 😉
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I love your site’s layout and your post! I’m actually beginning my Vegan journey this week, so it’s nice to connect with others who are all about a healthy lifestyle! Following!
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Thanks alot! Good luck on your journey I’m happy for you and I wish you good health!
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You’re super welcome! Thanks so much!😊
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The layout is great! Easy to read. Your site is very nice overall and great content!
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Thanks! I appreciate the love!
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I think your layout is nice and simple and I love the grey background but maybe decrease the font size little bit other than that everything is great
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Awesome thanks for your comment! I will definitely look into that 😊
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I love the simplicity of the layout , and the small personal touches ! Interesting post , being vegan isn’t easy ! I’m vegetarian so people say it would be easier for me , but I can’t part with my dairy , which is practically the reason that I’m not dead right now 😂
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Thanks alot! I spent alot more time being vegetarian myself because I really felt like pizza 🍕 was my one true love 😂 so I understand the struggle. Hopefully, if you feel the transition is right for you I can be there to offer you some tips but for now I hope you remain strong in your vegetarian lifestyle as you have alot to be proud of. I salute you! 😎
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Haha ! French Fries is my one true love 🍟🍟.
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👌 I certainly can’t blame you for that one! I think we all have had a huge crush on Fries at some point in our lives 😊
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Haha definitely. Who can resist long , golden , strips of goodness ?
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Very few I presume haha
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Okay in am struggling with income right now my son is very sick right now and I am trying the best that I can to get is medical bill paid for and I lost my job because what idoit we got in office this . isn’t even helping me and my wife Tanya as two boys one is 5 and other one 7 years old it their was I god we wouldnt be in the predictable we would have barrow the money but they have turned us down everywhere we went to
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I’m really sorry to hear that. I’m not sure what I can do to help you in that situation. Please contact me directly if you have any suggestions.
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I agree the layout looks great!
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Thanks alot! I appreciate it 😊
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They layout is good, but I’d suggest increasing the font size.
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The layout is good but I’d suggest increasing the font size and maybe changing the grey to white so the text is more visible.
Good job!
http://www.jprobinson.org
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Awesome I will keep that in mind! Appreciate the feedback 👍 Thank you!
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No problem. Pls check out my new layout http://www.jprobinson.org. Thanks.
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It looks great! very easy to read and I love the header image!
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Thanks.
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I love the theme and tyhe look of your blog, but maybe a bit more contrast on the post background and text? Some readers may find it hard to read similar shades. I would suggest lightening the background or darkening the text. But in any case, your blog looks really welcoming. 🙂
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Thanks for the suggestions! Really appreciate it!
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Hey just read your blog! I think it’s to the point and easy to read, while also puts across the message you are trying to! Really liked it!
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Thanks! Appreciate you taking the time to give me some feedback!
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Hey Chris,
Just had a look at your site. I agree with what most comments say, it is really neat and clean. If I may though, I would suggest for you to make the title of your blog – RisFit – appear in the header, next to your picture. I believe that would make it even clearer. Hope this helps! Great posts by the way. I loved the Superman Diet 😉
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Thank you I had it in the header previously but it was hard to read so I put it under the image temporarily until I decide whether to change the header image altogether or change the font color. Thanks alot for your feedback! Glad you enjoyed my post 😊
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Hello Fellow Bloggers!
A 74-year old Swiss architect may be an unlikely hero; but Peter Zumthor is certainly one of mine.
This post describes my thoughts on hearing him give a rare public lecture. I hope you find it interesting!
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Really interesting!
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Bit over my head as i mostly stick to silly poetry but dig the layout and your enthusiasm is really evident and you’ve a rather pleasant writing style
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Nice.
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Happy Monday, all!
First time dipping my toes into the Community Pool (because sharing my words isn’t scary enough, so let’s try doing it whilst wearing a bathing suit, shall we?). I wrote this blog post a couple weeks ago, and I’m still no closer to having a diagnosis. I figured splashing around in here would be a good distraction while I continue play the waiting game.
Fair warning – I completely overshare (including my nicknames for my breasts) and use words like “nipple” and “bloody discharge.”
Has anyone had a similar experience – either with unexplained bleeding, or a long wait for a diagnosis? I’d love to hear your thoughts over on my blog.
http://www.traciyork.com/have-my-fathers-eyes-possibly-his-cancer-gene/
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Really touching and well written, of course
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Thanks! 😀
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😊😊😊
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For quite a scary episode in your life, you sure know how to keep it light and humorous. Hope things work out for the best!
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Thanks!
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❤
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Your sense of humor is really great. I have a feeling you hear that often, but what’s once more? 🙂
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Awww, thanks so much! I do often hear things about my sense of humor, but usually it’s “grate” (as in, “you’re really grating on my nerves, Momma”) not so much “great.” You totally made my day! 😀
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Me making your day makes my day!! 😄
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Such an amazing post! Commented!
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Thanks so much!
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Hi! I don’t have a similar experience, but I’m sure keeping tabs on yours. Humor and an unflinching eye at seeing what is, and smiling anyway gives me hope that I’ll have a good example in you to follow if I do have to deal with this in the future. 🙂
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Angela, as always, you ROCK! *hugs*
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I love how you add these catching images and gifs! I also really enjoyed your content and your vulnerability with us. I hope that your journey is nothing but blessed
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Thanks so much, Elena! The gifs were actually a last minute decision, to try to lighten the tone a bit more. Appreciate your kind thoughts!
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I love the way your sense of humor shines through your writing. I really enjoyed reading this and I wish you luck as you navigate this medical journey – whatever it turns out to be.
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Aww, thanks Sydney!
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Wish you strength! Love your sense of humor and the way you write. Hope we can continue to celebrate your blog in the future. Look forward to reading more 😊
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Thank you so much, RisFit! I really appreciated your kind words, and I’m hoping to do come more celebrating (with future good news) sooner rather than later. Fingers crossed!
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Your humor just made this post lighter when it heavy and scary situation I love that .. and I hope you get well soon
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Thank you, Razan – that’s what I was going for. Not just for my readers, but for myself – the silliness helps with the scared. Appreciate your well wishes!
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It’s a pretty serious matter, but how you write makes me feel like it’s no big deal. I’m sure you’re going be okay, Traci. Have faith. 🙂 Everything happens for a reason. 🙂
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Thanks! ❤
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I love it how you have a microblog for those who may not have the time to read the entire blog!
Well I read the entire thing though! It’s amazingly written!!
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your kind words!
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I’m new with this. Can you help me?
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Hey, are you new to wordpress in general or just to Community Pool?
If the latter, then welcome – just share a few lines and a link to your latest post, and I’m sure you’ll get a lot of feedback from everyone here! And don’t forget to check out other people’s blogs as well :p
If you’re new to wordpress, you’re still welcome here obviously, but I’d also recommend you try out First Friday. It’s intended exactly for people who are just starting out 🙂
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What kind of help do you need? Ben explains pretty well in post how to use this space… in a nutshell you link to your blog posts and ask for certain type of feedback. Like I see this post of yours: https://misspebia.wordpress.com/2017/07/31/a-fresh-start-mcm-dav-college-for-women-is-once-again-filled-with-a-new-batch-of-young-minds/
Are you looking for specific feedback on it?
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Thanks
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Hey guys! I have made a new post! Kindly tell me what you guys think of it! I will be sure to give feedback and comments on your posts as well! It’s about how flaws can be beautiful!
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That was a beautiful story!
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Thanks guys!
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Commented 🙂
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Thanks!
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Wonderful and thought provoking article
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Thanks!
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I was actually looking for this kind of articles. True words and a lovely story. Congratulations!
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Thanks! I’m glad you could relate to it!
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I always enjoy your blog! 🙂
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Thanks
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Beautiful story. It’s important that we take life at its fullest.
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That’s exactly what I was aiming at.
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I like your post 🙂 I wish I could be as confident as ” Baldy”.
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Thanks! Confidence lies in all of us. She just knew how to use it!
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Beautiful story!
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Thanks!
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Loved it! I personally think turning flaws or weaknesses into strengths are one of the most liberating things you can do. I really enjoyed this post 😊
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Thanks!
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Truly loved the story!
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Lets be friends! Friendship day is August 6th and I would love for you to check out this fun free printable! Comments would be so appreciated! 🙂 http://www.celebratingwiththebug.com/friendship-card-printable/
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A really sweet post! 😀 Friendship really is worth celebrating 😊
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Thanks so much for checking it out! 🙂
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Very sweet! Love the card, too!!
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Thank you!
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I love your post! 😊
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Enjoyed reading! It was very unique !
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You have a community of friends right here! Nice post 😊
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Ah thanks! 🙂
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That was such a cuute post and well written too! The recipes you had posted are mouth watering too
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Thank you for checking it out!!!
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The printable is so cute! I’m always amazed by talented people like you.
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Thank you so much!
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Awesome
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Hey everyone, I have been running a series of a short story on my blog. Just currently updated with the 6th part, kindly check it out.
https://nanaammasaah.wordpress.com/2017/07/26/the-unexpected-6/
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Great post. If you don’t mind me asking; what inspired you to write the short story?
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Hi, thanks for reading. My inspiration for this particular story was several observations I made about relationships on campus. I just decided to get a fiction out of it.
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Hey all, I just added a new piece that involves my first time working with a fellow WordPress blogger! My sites all about people telling their awesome stories to help inspire others. I would love for everyone to check out her story and I hope everyone can show her some love for her great writing.
https://roadswetake.com/2017/07/31/eve-d-finding-passion-and-purpose/
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This weeks blog post is slightly different to my usual travel & photography posts. I decided to review and promote a local event that is happening. I think it’s a good opportunity to help small businesses if the word gets out, and technically still falls into my travel category!
https://shootfromthetrip.com/2017/07/30/a-gamble-with-death/
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hello wonderful bloggers , here’s a dark short fiction for you guys -https://finallyunchainedone.wordpress.com/2017/07/18/psychotic/
hope you guys like it . 🙂 😉 ❤
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https://finallyunchainedone.wordpress.com/2017/07/18/psychotic/
, sorry is the link is not working , don’t know why
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The link worked just fine 🙂
http://www.diyingmachine.wordpress.com
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yayy 😉
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I like your writing style! Also, I think the format of this particular piece helps to make the story more…well, it resonates better, I think. Thanks for sharing!! 💫😌
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story more…….??? i am in great suspense
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Did I say something wrong? 😜 hahaha
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nahh , just peaked my curiosity 😉
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Oh. Haha! My bad. We’ll blame my slowness on Monday, okay? 🙃😁
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absolutely , will be there 😉
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What do you think of my side bar widgets on my blog at https://birdflight.blog? The order of the widgets, the number of posts under each category, and do you think listing “MY MOST POPULAR POSTS” (posts with most “likes” to date) is better than listing “MY TOP POSTS” (which lists posts in the last 48 hours with the most views)? The latter will always be more recent posts. The former could be from much further in the past.
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Maybe you could do 2 sets: one with most popular and add 5 posts and one with most recent and add 5 to that too 🙂
http://www.diyingmachine.wordpress.com
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Thank you for the suggestion, diyingmachine!
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I like how you have them set up, and definitely have the most popular posts instead of the top – that way, since you have your recent posts also listed, it will give you more variety (if that makes sense).
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Thanks for the feedback, Traci! I was sort of leaning in the direction you suggested.
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I think they look fine, but I’m on the app. I’ve been contemplating side bar widgets on my blog, too, like how much is too much or too little. Yours looks neat and organized from my end! I struggle with having too much white space. I didn’t see any issues for you. Does this help? Let me know if you’d like more specifics. Cheers! 💫
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Thanks so much for the feedback, theloyalbritwit. It’s much appreciated. Yes, I have tried to create a balance between filling the white space but not overwhelming the space.
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You’re quite welcome! And I think you’ve balanced it well.
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Thanks again!
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I don’t seem to see them on my Samsung 7
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Hi Michael. Perhaps they show at the bottom of your screen instead of on the side, depending on the size of your view area. Thanks for looking.
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I would go for “my most popular posts” if those are the ones you are the most proud of 🙂
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Thanks, MyStoriesWithMusic. Actually, my most popular posts are neither my favorite nor the ones I’m most proud of, but I do want readers to see the ones they want to see.
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I think the former is better because it is your best work! Cheers!
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Thanks, arpi2017. I think that’s what I’m going to go with. Have a great day and thanks for your feedback.
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It was my pleasure!
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Hi 😊 I would love some feedback on my new post The Thief https://mystorieswithmusic.com/2017/07/31/the-thief/ Read the story and find the song. The layout of the blog is also new. I will of course read all your blogs as well 😀 Cheers
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I read it a short while ago. It was really good. Some might have a problem with the length but I had no problems with it! Nice job!
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Thank you 😊 Really glad you liked it 🙂 The stories are longer than most people post, but I figured that some might like it and it is just so much more fun for me to write 😀
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I used to write very long posts too. I found that gradually people were not reading them as much, but I occasionally still throw a long one in every once in awhile. Its your blog after all! 🙂
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Very true, some won’t read longer post. I figured that I will just have one type of posts that are these stories with music and if someone are in the mood for that type of post, they know where to find them 😊👍
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That is a perfect way to think about them!
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Commented 🙂
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Thank you 😀
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Always enjoy these 🙂
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You are too kind! 😀
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Fantastically written!
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Thank you so much! 😊 That really means a lot! 🙂
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Thanks to support of you here on Community Pool I am well on my way to blogging regularly. Last week again produced record amount of comments so I’ll be instituting “Featured comment of the week” on all my Monday posts from now on. Here is the latest post:
http://howtoaddict.com/give-surrender-can-focus-things-matter/
Please let me know how you like it and if there is anything you think I could do to make my posts more attractive.
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Solid, powerful, and sage advice. Wow. I’m struggling to articulate right now. Thank you for sharing and happy blogging!! I always look forward to your posts here on Monday. 😃💫
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When praise comes from someone with BA in English/creative writing – I know I’m doing well ;). Hope to see you more on my blog, really enjoy your comments!
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Ahhhh I’m glad you think so! The BA is just a piece of paper that tells me I somewhere survived four years of hardcore education. 😅 I’m always glad to comment! And yes, I do need to pop in more often!
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Surviving four years of hardcore education is a worthy feat! And I can tell you are quite disciplined… writing those blog posts of yours every day is quite a feat. Anybody reading this comment – do yourself a favor and go to theloyalbritwit’s blog and read few stories… you’ll be hooked in no time.
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Thank you!!!! Most sincerely. ☺️
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I liked this post. We too easily get caught up in all the drama in the world today. We need to prioritize and stand our ground on the things that matter most to us.
Thank you for your post. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks Courtney! Really liked that post of yours on making new friends: https://ouradventurebook2017.wordpress.com/2017/07/29/5-tips-for-making-new-friends-in-a-new-town/
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Thanks Courtney! I really liked that post of yours on making new friends – I’ve tried to link it here but my comment gets rejected ;(
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Oh, it showed up! Praised be the comment moderators!
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Thank you so much!
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I enjoyed your post! Very powerful, short, + sweet! My only suggestion would be to add a few more visuals to your post to keep your readers engaged. Other than that, it’s great! Keep going! 😊
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I’m thinking about including a video with post – but not sure I can do that much production… will look into it. Thanks for the suggestion!
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That sounds great! Maybe you can do a video for a few posts instead of all. You’re super welcome! Best of luck! 🙂
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Awesome post! Let go of the things that don’t serve you and focus on the things that offer you lasting success. This is a great idea and I’m pleased to read your perspective on it. Really enjoyed this! 😊
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Yes – the more of us are able to focus on good things we do in life, the better world will ultimately be. See you next week here on Community Pool!
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Hello Everybody, Simon from To Cut a Short Story Short here with my latest post, a story about a visit to a nuclear command bunker. It’s entitled ‘November 9.’ 800 words. I hope you like it!
https://simonjwood.wordpress.com/2017/07/28/november-9/
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Also, a recent post which you may have missed, a kind of modern fable, Promise Her the Moon, also 800 words. Please check it out and I hope you find it enjoyable!
https://simonjwood.wordpress.com/2017/07/18/promise-her-the-moon/
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Both stories are great. I’ve linked to both of them in one of my posts… so to anyone scrolling through these comments – be sure to visit links and read 😉
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Hi, yes, thanks again for mentioning me in that inspiring post (recommended and link below) and they’re quite quick reads too for anyone who hasn’t visited my blog before!
http://howtoaddict.com/spreading-message-positivity-blogs/
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You have some interesting posts. They could almost be fables with a moral to the story. Will enjoy reading more of your stories. http://www.brilliantviewpoint.com
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Hi, thank you. There are a few like that, but I don’t think too many. This one (or two?) just ended up that way! Incidentally, I published another today that might be of interest, an attempt at a humorous postcard from abroad! Postcard from Hispaniola (150 words).
https://simonjwood.wordpress.com/2017/08/02/postcard-from-hispaniola/
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Hello folks!
For the first time in years, I decided to try my hand at weaving poetry into the breathtaking concept of romantic love.
Here it is: https://lampteacupoverthinking.wordpress.com/2017/07/31/embers-and-silence/
Do leave a comment or drop a message. I’d love to hear from you, wonderful person!
Love,
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Lovely poem.
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^_^
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Wow! This poem was beautiful and breathtaking. Is this your first foray into poetry, or just writing romantic poetry? Whichever the case, bravo!! Your pacing and imagery are well thought out and I sincerely adored the concept of time through daylight, nighttime, dawn, twilight etc. Thanks very much for sharing! 💫🙂
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I’ve been writing poetry for quite a while now, but always shied away from romantic poetry. I’m so glad you liked it! You, in specific, because I love the work you meticulously put up on your blog everyday. Thank you! ^_^
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You are quite welcome dear! I always enjoy yours, too. I wrote poetry whenever the mood strikes; but lately I’ve been writing it like crazy and yours has easily encouraged me to keep at it. 😁
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A very beautiful and expressive poem!!
Check out my blog https://whenlifeawakens.wordpress.com/
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Thank you!
Your blog seems so full of colour and life! Thank you for sharing your work! ^_^
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Thank you for this lovely comment!!
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Hey loved your poem! I’ve tried my hand at poetry but have failed miserably! I just don’t know how to start. Anyway, was good to read something so well written!
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I’m so glad you liked the poem! I wish I had something more helpful and/or witty to say about how you could start, but all I have is: emotion, image, rhythm, flow.
It’s wonderful to meet a fellow (Indian?) blogger!
Cheers,
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Yes Indian! 😃
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Hey guys, have a read of my first blog if you want.
It’s called ‘tragedy of trading your authenticity for approval’:
https://rawreveries.blog/2017/07/11/tragedy-of-trading-authenticity-for-approval/
🙂
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Some good points well made, not too lengthy and whilst i dont necessarily agree with you on all the points you don’t pitch it to hard which is good
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Thank you! Really appreciate it. I’m interested to know which points you don’t agree with if you don’t mind? Thanks 🙂
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Oh bugger sorry…wrong comment that was meant to appear
r somewhere else
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Haha no prob 🙂
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Left a comment directly on your post 🙂 Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for reading! 🙂
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I thought this blog was well written. Great ideas usually come from those who aren’t afraid to be themselves. Society has always consisted of the idea of thinking alike, fitting in, doing what is expected etc. I just think we see it more today because of social media. Either way, I agree with the message you are sending. Nice job!
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Thank you for your comment! Definitely agree 🙂
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This is a beautiful piece, I like the ending where you mention what it means to truly live in this world!!
Check out my blog https://whenlifeawakens.wordpress.com/
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Thanks!
Have done 🙂
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Hi everyone! Good to see you all again!
I recently wrote a review of a book I couldn’t finish – the first book I’ve stopped reading in years.
I’d appreciate any feedback! Thank you :3
http://wp.me/p8eD4m-D3
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I was very curious to figure out what that book was! Sometime I can’t finish a book too, but then come back later and find it nicer somehow 😀
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Haha 😀 I like your review, probably more fun than the book it seems 👍
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Good Morning, Bloggers!
I tried a new format with my latest post. It has two lists in it-a “why” list and a “what to do” list. Check it out! I would appreciate any honest feedback you have…
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Always interesting to read others opinions even if i disagree completely . good luck.
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I agree. It helps you see the other side’s viewpoint as well as gain a better understanding of your own views.
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Matt, I enjoyed your post. It was easy to read and the logic unfolded in an orderly way. For me, logical + biblically-based + kind tone = GOOD. https://gracelead.co
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Thanks, I try to keep things simple and practical with a Biblical foundation while avoiding the yelling and screaming that many do online.
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Check out my blog to.. http://Www.dpurplekid.wordpress.com
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Hi everyone!
I’m back with a post today after a little while, about music and playing the piano, among other thoughts. I’d love it if you gave it a read! https://justaplatypus.wordpress.com/2017/07/31/of-piano-lessons-and-prodigies/
My previous post was about how I’ve been writing a bit less often, as well as sharing something interesting I recently did – and I’d really like to know what everyone thinks of this idea, and if you’d like to try it too! – https://justaplatypus.wordpress.com/2017/07/15/writing-therapy-and-peoples-perceptions-of-me/
Good to see everyone here this evening, can’t wait to discover lots of new blogs to follow! 😀
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Thank you for sharing the article about piano lessons/prodigies. Music is wonderful and I agree, if someone enjoys what they play they will continue playing. Great post. http://www.brilliantviewpoint.com
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Hi Everyone! I would love some feedback on my site’s setup and readability (as well as any other feedback you may want to offer). I am only a few weeks into blogging, and I am really looking to grow my audience. If you are interested in home improvement, home design, or DIY projects, please feel free to follow or subscribe. Check me out at http://damselwithadrill.com/ and thank you so much in advance.
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My Fiance and I just closed on our first house not too long ago and are moving in in less than 2 weeks! I have so many projects in my mind of what I want to do. Glad I found your blog for even more inspiration!
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Congratulations! I have a lot of great posts coming up, I hope you enjoy them 🙂
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I like the idea and the layout …wasnt quite sure what each post was on though as there was an affiliate disclaimer thing going on that took up most of the space .
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Good point, I assumed the titles were self explanatory but I realize it covers the excerpt. I will look into putting the disclaimer after the first paragraph. Thank you!
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It looks beautiful to me. I viewed it from a phone. I like the colors you chose, and the layout does not look cluttered.
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Thank you Courtney! I appreciate you taking a few minutes to check it out 🙂
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I really like your layout. It goes nicely with the theme of your blog. Nice job!
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Thank you! I appreciate the feedback 🙂
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Your layout is great! Easy to navigate. Can’t wait to see next project, I am hoping to buy a new home soon so these ideas might come in handy!
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Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate you taking a few minutes to look around. Good luck with your journey to home ownership, it is really a fun process!
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Your menus are beautiful! I like the whole layout. What theme are you using?
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Hi Haley, thank you so much! It is called Marline Lite. I am using the free version, but there is an upgrade as well that has many more features.
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Hi Laura, the site looks good looking from my phone. The layout is easy to read. Perhaps like Michael mentioned the disclaimer take some too Michael space.
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Meant to write ” too much space” !
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Thank you, I figured out how to fix this moving forward. I need to go back and do it to my first several posts as well. Thank you for taking a look!
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Hey everybody!
How is your monday going?
This is a post i wrote last week on the amazing benefits one can receive unexpectedly.
Can’t wait to see what the pool has to offer, Enjoy!
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Well written 👍
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Thank you!
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Amazing !
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Thank you!
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Cool,..do check out mine to http://www.dpurplekid.WordPress.com
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Your blog is very interesting, you have a unique writing style very nice 🙂
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It’s July 31st so it’s time for a Monthly Look Ahead! The coming month isn’t too exciting for me but if you’re interested, please write your own MLA post! I’d love to read them!
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Hey, maybe I should post a link. Seems like a good idea….
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Hey bloggers,
Doing a free verse poetry blog mainly using the daily prompt as inspiration and set myself a target to do it for a year, any thoughts/advice would be more then welcome,
I have my own style of how I like my wordplay to be so into mainly about getting it to a wider audience.
http://emolovepoetry.wordpress.com
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Intense stuff…good luck !
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Thanks man!
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I loved it ! As someone who appreciates dark poetry herself , this touched me . Keep going , hope to read more from you
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Thank you so much, very much appreciated.
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Hello,
This week I discuss the emotional hardships of editing the first draft of your novel:
Any feedback is welcome!
Happy blogging!
Ida
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You’ve got pertinent, relatable, and great information in your post, Ida. There’s so much that goes into writing and editing that could lead to a writer throwing in the towel. Great advice and comments. Cheers! 💫
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Thank you very much! ^_^ I’ve become a master at throwing the towel, so now I’m practicing holding on, for a change. 😛
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You’re welcome! One has to do what one can, right?! 😜 The whole chugging along and cajoling the muse seems to be my current motto.
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Hi everyone,
Thank you to everyone who has commented, followed or given feedback on my blog – you guys are amazing!
Here is my next post and the latest adventure of dearest Normon!
https://booandlittleman.wordpress.com/2017/07/31/hobgoblin/
Hope you enjoy! X
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I really do like that Normon 🙂 even if I guess it is a story for kids 😉
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Stories for kids are the best stories! X
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Have you ever had a fear? Ofcourse you have, everyone has. It’s just normal. My new blog is out. Please do read it and if you like it and relate with it, then please do like it, comment your thoughts, share it with your family and friends and also follow my blog for further blog updates. https://helzeeblog.wordpress.com/2017/07/25/winning-over-myself/ ❤
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Very well written and great content too! Thank you for sharing!!
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Thank you so much…. I am glad you liked it.
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Hi everyone, I posted at the weekend about a hectic 57 hour trip I made back home to the UK, hope you enjoy. Thanks! http://wp.me/p7M2wy-1zZ
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That was quite a trip, thanks for sharing the beautiful photos. http://www.brilliantviewpoint.com
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Thanks for your comment, much appreciated!
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Happy Monday all! My blog focuses on video games, Netflix and Tv Show Reviews, fanfiction, creative writing and anything geeky! I’m always looking for new friends so don’t hesitate to drop by! The link this week will be for my creative writing piece, it’s a poem about the daily topic :Lust! Feedback appreciated as I’m trying to get better with 1st person!
https://gamersunitedgg.com/2017/07/30/daily-prompt-lust-explosive-love/
Have a great day!
-Luna 🙂
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Heeeey !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just here to say Hi like a creepy old man !
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Hi lol
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Hey gang! Today I’m sharing a post made up of personal stories on never being in love (yet?). It’s kind of divided into micro-memoirs.
https://antipodalpull.com/2017/07/30/snapshots-lovelessness/
Let me know what you think! And I’d be happy to return the favor. ☺️ Thanks!
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These are cute, I particularly like the awkward date 🙂 This set-up is different and I personally like it. Not sure how old these stories are, but you have your whole life ahead of you to fall in love! Keep writing though, these are good memories
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Thank you so much! You’re absolutely right. Thanks for reading. ❤
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I loved it ! 😀 and the layout is peaceful which makes reading the post a calm experience ! Looking forward to reading more !
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Yay! I’m so glad. Thanks for reading!
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Loved this post. I gave it a comment and you a follow. I was so sucked into it! Really well written 😊
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Hello fellow bloggers! It’s my dream to write flash fictions or short stories and I’ve started to try to learn as I write. This is my second short story.
https://yuvisbuzz.wordpress.com/2017/07/28/kids-are-like-that/
I welcome your thoughts and feedback. Thanks in advance!
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Woo hoo!! WordPress got me into flash fiction too! You should check out the blog Sunday Photo Fiction. They give you a photo prompt once a week (Sunday, lol) and a bunch of people link their stories and give each other feedback.
https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/
P.S. The story you posted here was awesome! 🙂
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