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It has been awhile since I have visited the community pool. I made a new post today and would appreciate any feedback on my posts or blog in general. Thanks in advance! https://beautyonabudget123.wordpress.com/2016/09/12/my-makeup-story/
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Just commented! Nice content, good use of images, good use of tags 🙂 Consider using additional tags, maybe more specific ones such as “Clinique” or maybe even a type of makeup (like “foundation”). You can use up to 15 tags/categories, and adding a few more might help increase traffic.
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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Thanks so much!!! Great advice….for some reason I have a hard time with tags. I will definitely check out a post!
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Hey just saw your blog, It looks great. The only feedback I have is – that when we click on makeup on the top bar and are viewing the post one after the other in succession – There is no like/share button at the end of each post… so consider adding those. I am from India and I blog about Beauty Lifestyle and Design. I still finding my feet so do swing by and let me know what you thought ! Cheers 🙂
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Thanks so much for the advice!! I had not noticed those weren’t showing….I appreciate it so much!! I will definitely swing by! 🙂 Thanks again!
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Hi everyone! I run a blog called The Lily Note Pad where I post everything from book reviews to social commentary articles. I recently posted a post about my current state of happiness and positivty as it pertains to self love. If anyone has any other of their own stories or advice for staying optimistic and happy, I would love to see them!
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Just commented. LOVE the most recent post ❤ Rock on! I'm totally following you 🙂 Great content, good use of images, good tags. If you're looking for suggestions, consider breaking up your paragraphs a bit more. Right now they are a little long and blocky. Not a huge deal, but blogging is a very visual medium, and the longer the text is, the more intimidating the article can be for some readers.
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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Thank you so much for the feedback, it is honestly so helpful! You start to forget things when you stare at the same blog for a long time haha! I will definitely check out (more than) one of your posts tonight!
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Just looking for some feedback on my most recent post. This one is about awkward handshakes, but the blog itself tends to focus on my attempts at quitting smoking 🙂
I am trying to connect with other bloggers, but it’s not going well for me ha.
https://scattiniquitssmoking.wordpress.com/2016/09/11/the-art-of-the-awkward-handshake/
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Just commented. Love your sense of humor! Good content, too. Suggestion: do you use tags/categories? Categories help readers find related posts within your blog; tags help new readers find your work. If you’re having trouble meeting other bloggers, it may be because they’re not seeing your work!
Also, best of luck with the quitting smoking bit. That’s tough stuff!
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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Thank you :)nah I haven’t been using tags. To be honest, I don’t even know what the are lol. I shall look into this. Thanks for the tip 🙂
I will for sure check out one of your posts, but I’ll have to do it in the morning. Me need shleep
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If you go to Reader and search a term, that’s a tag! If you don’t have any tags, people won’t be able to search and find your posts. Check it out and if you have any questions, let me know! Good luck 🙂
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Hi everyone, I wrote a book review last week on Thursday which received no comments.
I was wondering what I could do to improve my reviewing and I would like to hear all your thoughts. As always, I’m willing to help out anyone who provides constructive criticism in turn 🙂
Here’s a link below.
https://scratchesandscribbles.com/2016/09/08/remembering-babylon-david-malouf/
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I hope everyone is having a great time blogging. I just started my blog a few months ago, and I would be very happy if you can drop by and take a peek. I’ll do the same. 😊
My blog: https://survivinginjapan.wordpress.com
Feedback good and bad are welcome. I would love to hear your thoughts! Thanks in advance.
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Looking forward for feedback and positive critisism
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Hi bloggers! Meet my budgie Gio https://wildlifenatureme.wordpress.com/2016/09/10/gio/ 🙂
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Very cute! Just stopped by. I like how short your posts are — it makes it easy to read a bunch all at once 😉 Great use of images, too!
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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Thank you!
I’m heading over to your site now 🙂
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Gio is a cutey. Landing on your head made me laugh. https://gracelead.co
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Haha yes! That’s his new bad habit. I’m trying to keep him off. I don’t want him taking a bathroom break in my hair!
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Hello! I recently posted something a bit different than I usually do. Here’s the link…
Netflix and Chill – free2bme27
https://free2bme27.wordpress.com/2016/08/25/netflix-and-chill/
My blog is mainly just about things that cross my mind and life in general with a few personal posts mixed in. The most recent are some photos of my “happy place”, a post about Fall, and the fact that I recently discovered my personality type is one of the rarest worldwide. I knew I was special! Lol. I hope you will have a look and let me know what you think. As always, I love the Community Pool because I enjoy discovering new blogs to follow! Have a great day fellow bloggers!
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Your blog is so well written, and I loved the way your latest post captures the essence of youth! I’ll look forward to reading more from you, best of luck!
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Hi everyone! 😀I’m new to the blogging world and would appreciate some tips and feedback. Please include a link to your blog so that I can check it out as well. Thanks for your feedback!
https://faithwalkinghebrews111.com
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Enjoyed reading your blog…you have a new follower.
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Thank you! 🙂
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I visited your page. Love the layout and I enjoyed reading your blog. You have a new follower 🙂 I look forward to reading your blog posts.
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Thank you! I look forward to reading yours as well!😊
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Perplexed by doing right is a wonderful post. You expressed yourself well and glorified God in the process. https://gracelead.co
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Thank you! 😀
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Hi everyone – delighted to have been nominated for The Sunshine Blogger Award by a fellow blogger and reader and thought I’d share the Q/A and my own nomination for the award.
https://nobodymusings.wordpress.com/2016/09/13/the-sunshine-blogger-award/
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wow, to be honest I didn’t go in with high expectations: it’s a q&a of someone I know nothing about!
BUT you managed to write your answers in a super engaging way and I felt like I saw a little slice of who you are, great job 🙂
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Naw, thanks! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it, and maybe you’ll read more and see more too! haha
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Hi! So I read your post and I loved it!! Your writing voice is so sweet and light and engaging. I loved that you described breaking free from your old life as “doing a Britney” and I can totally relate to you on the matter of tea and coffee!
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Hey! Glad you find me engaging, that’s always a pleasure to hear! I try to write as fluidly and honestly as I can without much of an edit so that I am in the writing – not something that works for everyone but makes a good read-back. Keep being awesome and get the kettle on 😉
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Hey guys,
I’ve got two recent posts I’d love to get some feedback on.
#1. my very first guest post by a talented poet that wrote a poem for world suicide prevention day titled “for anyone who has thought suicide is the best option” (content may be sensitive)
#2. my poem titled “the contortionist”
http://www.maggyliu.com
Always happy to give feedback to other people’s blogs too, just ask 🙂
Thanks,
Maggy
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I really enjoyed both of your recent posts, very well written and powerful! I also liked the simplicity of your theme which allows your content to speak for itself – keep it up!
I would also love it if you could give my blog a read, click on my name and let me know your thoughts 🙂
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Thank you so much & absolutely will do 🙂
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Hello everyone…
I’m trying to touch on some more political world issues. I hope my latest post keeps the readers interest. Let me know your thoughts. I’m trying to express my opinion without offending either.
https://theprettyplatform.com/2016/09/11/dont-oppress-the-oppressed/
Thanks for your time.
Elke
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Just stopped by! I applaud your willingness to tackle an issue so difficult — political issues (especially when mixed with religious issues) are always very charged and emotional. You did a good job examining both sides of the issue, and good use of images as well. My suggestion: use fewer tags. If you have more than 15 tags/categories, WordPress blocks your post from Reader, and you’ve got way more than 15. Your traffic may increase if you omit some of those superfluous tags!
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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Natalie,
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my latest post. And thank you for the suggestion on the tags. I’m still learning and I really thought the more the better. You see, I should always stick to my life motto, simplicity is key. Fewer tags is definitely easier for my as well. It killed me trying to come up with that many anyway. hahaha. I truly hope that helps with traffic. My most difficult thing to achieve is getting readers to share their comments. I love conversation and wish others felt free to say whats on their mind even if it meant disagreeing with me.
I just read your post about stress and commented. Very encouraging words and a great reminder as well. I also liked your About You post, “exploring new ways of thinking and behaving”. I love that. I’m always open to learn about other ways of thinking, other ideas, other explanations. I feel it opens the mind to amazing things. I look forward to reading your guest post Just a Girl and a Bike. You have a new follower.
Elke a.k.a. The Pretty Platform
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Aww, thank you! You’re very sweet 🙂
Getting people to leave comments is definitely tough. Community Pool has helped me increase my comments, and it has also helped me learn how to leave a good comment for someone else — I have created friendships with other bloggers, and now we always comment on each other’s posts, which is awesome 🙂 Blogging can be tough, but you can do it! Good luck!!
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Thanks for the encouragement.
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Hello! I’m still pretty new, but would like some feedback on my writing and posts thus far. Thanks in advance!
http://meganepush.wordpress.com
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Funny reads. I like the layout and the humor. Keep them coming!
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed! I took a peek at your blog as well. I could tell when the page loaded and I was greeted with photos of ramen and Hakone that I would enjoy the contents (and have so far). Nice work!
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Thanks! Your blog name, megane push… “pushing the eyeglasses back up” quite an otaku feel.
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Yes, a bit. I grew up around anime and gaming, and some habits die hard. I starting using MeganePush on websites after I had to start wearing glasses (curse you nearsightedness) and it just stuck since then.
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In that case, your nickname suits you.
You’ll fit in well in Japan.
I once was an avid gamer. But that was a loooong time ago. Still love anime though.
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Welcome to the Pool.
Anyway, I like your view on the gamer’s life (we have a life once we power down our platforms, of course). You may want to use less tags, though – I hear that more than 6 tags and you may be excluded from WP searches. Going to be hard to be found that way, you know?
https://scicasual.wordpress.com
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Just commented! Nice content, good post length, good use of tags. 🙂 My suggestion: consider adding your images into the actual post. In the used book post, you have that awesome image of all the books — add into your text. This will break up the text and add a little color. Blogging is a very visual medium 🙂
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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After reading a few of your posts I see what you mean about breaking up the text with images and other media. Your posts look great! I will definitely try to work more on that. Thanks for the feedback!
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Welcome to WordPress. I think you’ve got a great start, and my only suggestion would be to use images in your posts. It really helps to generate reader interest. Plus, it makes your blog pretty 😉
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I like your writing style! You have wit and your posts are easy to read. I suggest adding a few more widgets.
Happy Blogging!
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Thanks! I hadn’t looked much into adding widgets. I’ll definitely give it a shot.
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Hey guys… Check out my blog and let me know what you think.
http://www.shuvigautam.wordpress.com
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Interesting stories you got there.
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Thanks much 😀
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You’ve got some neat content, I would love to read more! I would suggest cleaning up your theme a little, your home page is a tad crowded for my personal liking but you’re doing great!
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Hey thank you… Will surely look into that.
Follow for more 🙂
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Hello fellow lovely bloggers! I am in the process of getting back into blogging and would love to know your thoughts and suggestions!
https://venandivita.wordpress.com/
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Like the layout. Nice, clean, and easy to navigate. The photos and writing are very good as well. Great job!
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Thank you so much!
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Quite a lot of thought-provoking stuff. Clean, easy to read, nice overall. Perhaps if you can, make sure each post has at least an image on your front page? Not only can it grab visual attention, but it can make your blog look more consistent because every post has a picture – they’re all equally important. Besides, you seem to have an eye for imagery, why not have some fun with it?
https://scicasual.wordpress.com
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Thank you so much! And yes, I’ll definitely work towards consistency with images on the home page! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Loved “The Army at Dusk.” 🙂 As for your layout, what’s the “My Chase” section? It has things like logout listed on there, and I’m not sure it’s needed — it may be just cluttering up your page. (though if it has a purpose, please tell me! I’m curious)
Would you be willing to review one of my posts? Click on my name and choose whichever one appeals to you the most🙂
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Thank you, that means a lot! “My Chase” was my take on the “About Me” page 🙂 hmm, I’ll look into that because there shouldn’t be!
Of course, I’ll peruse through your blog now! 🙂 thanks again!
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Hello everyone! I’m new to this community pool and would love love love some feedback on my website, complete honesty is entirely appreciated. https://happylittlemoon.wordpress.com/2016/01/07/me-myself-i/
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I love the honesty and open style of your writing. Don’t loose that
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So much appreciation for you.
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Welcome!
Two suggestions: add pictures to your posts to break up text a little, and expand your About page so people can get to know you a bit better.
But your writing is good and you’re very honest which come across well.
Happy Blogging!
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Thank you for reminding me what it was like when I was 15. I read it and thought of my teen son and that his life too will change and he only has one time to be a kid. So well written. Bravo! I was already a follower and I’m so glad that I am.
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It’s been awhile since I posted on here. I would love feedback on my latest post. Thank you! Is it a Good Thing, or a Bad Thing?
I’ve given tidbits about my pregnancy with Princess Pea before, but I don’t think I’ve shared this story . It was a week before school started when I…
agency,Family,women,motherhood,pregnancy,choices,love
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Hey everyone, I am very new to blogging and slowly starting to build up my posts. Would be very keen for keen for feedback around my blog in general and the best way to start connecting with similar minded people. https://nourishdlifestyle.wordpress.com/
Thanks!!
Jay 🙂
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Hi! I’m on a similar path when it comes to food and health so I’ll be following you closely.
Have you though of adding a few nice photos of your own to the posts as well? I think it would make your content even more interesting!
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Thanks so much! Photos are definitely on the agenda for next stage. Now that I have a better idea of what I’m actually trying to do next step is making my blog more exciting and inviting. Thanks for the tips 😊
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One thing I’ve learned about building up my blogging habit seriously is being on some kind of schedule (I can post whenever I want, but I *must* post on Monday unless something major has happened and I can’t do it). It keeps me accountable and blogging, so I don’t gradually not blog anymore and disappear. Blogging is fun, but *writing* blogs is practiced. Then you’ll see that your blog is being built up, and so have your skills and your eye for topics. Even blogging once a week can do that for you, I’ve found.
https://scicasual.wordpress.com
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I enjoyed visiting your blog. I have to say that it’s a pleasure to read your 100 word stories. I especially love Speechless. So amazingly eerie. I can read those forever. To communicate story, characters, and emotion in just 100 words is truly skillful. I will have to challenge myself one day to try it out. Your site is user friendly on my phone, no worries there. You have a new follower and a fan. Please keep doing the 100 to 200 word stories.
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Hey Everyone,
I was hoping for some feedback on my newest post, Superheroine, or my blog in general. Please let me know what you think. I appreciate any comments or advice in advance 🙂
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Hi Pool! I’ve been finding some amazing blogs well worth following on here lately, I’m loving this place! I’d be a fool not to occasionally throw my own page into the mix though, so here’s my latest addition to a series I’m enjoying adding to at the moment. Enjoy if you like 🙂 https://thetroublesometraveller.com/2016/09/13/dust-in-the-light/
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Wow, your writing tips are of great use to me! As a non-native English creature, I am always seeking for improvement in my writing. Following you closely now 😉
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This comment was intended to ‘askriverbed’, I’m sorry! Checking too many interesting blogs at the same time 😉 But I just read your last story, and I loved the flow of your writing!
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Thank you! I’ll try not to disappoint!
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For a minute I thought you had a travel blog, but it looks like it’s more personal than that. A quick scan of your blogs (nice use of pictures, by the way) and it just seems like your theme is too somber. Perhaps a slightly brighter background, if you can? Maybe even a different banner?
https://scicasual.wordpress.com
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Hi Jonny, you’re right, it does vary a lot from travel, and maybe it is time for a more upbeat theme! Duly noted, many thanks for taking the time
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Hi Jonny, I thought I’d let you know I took your advice and have changed my theme… I’m quite set in my ways usually so this will take some getting used to for me, but thank you for your advice, this was the push I needed to brighten things up!
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It looks more like this blog could now fit any mood – good, bad, high, low – and it still draws eyes thanks to the use of pictures. It’s very nice.
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I like your blog and have started following you. Look forward to reading more.
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Hello and thank you! Yours looks like just the kind of positive place I might like to check into occasionally too, so I’ve followed you right back 🙂
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Thank you….I try to keep it positive!
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Great to be back in the pool! The conversation is terrific – just found five new friends to follow 🙂 I’m toggling back and forth between creative work and processing my thoughts, but I think I’ll leave you with my latest short story: https://askriverbed.wordpress.com/2016/09/03/rescue/
Stop by for a read if you get a chance! We’re all in this together! Thx 🙂
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Liked it 🙂
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Wow, your writing tips are of great use to me! As a non-native English creature, I am always seeking for improvement in my writing. Following you closely now😉
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I would love to read more! You’ve got some neat content
This is my blog :))
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Hey all! Lady lawyer by day and new blogger! I’d like your thoughts on my blog. The only category waiting a blog post is in DIY but other than that, I have some travel, food, skincare, & work topics up! Any input appreciated!
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http://www.theprontiperspective.com
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I like the format of our blog and the content is great too
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I write posts on daily prompt, but it never shows up here. Can anyone please share how they post it here as comment section under daily prompts is always closed. Thanks.
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Hi Deesha, I struggled with this too.
Go to their full website.
https://wordpress.com/dailypost
Find the daily word that you want to write about and the click “show instructions” (it’s under the title with the number of responses).
There is probably an easy way but that’s how I did it 🙂
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Hi everyone, I recently started blogging.
If anyone has any criticisms, I’m happy to see them.
https://senseofdepth.wordpress.com
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I read your post titled Night Romance and liked it. Look forward to reading more.
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Thank you! I love your blogs, I am now following 🙂
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Thank you! I’m following you, too
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Simplest way to Save Water in the World
Link: http://wp.me/p3dJz1-g9
I just believe it can help everyone…feedback requested.
regards
Your Well Wisher Program
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I have changed my layout and written something new. Slowly getting into it and very happy about this community. For your comments and advice I would be more than thankful 🙂 Have a beautiful day!
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Lot of pink…oh well, it’s a nice shade of pink, like champagne. Anyway, I must know – why did you want to change your layout in the first place?
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It was much more pink before 🙂 I wanted something where I could have a better overview (me and the readers) I have the feeling that this one looks “cleaner”.
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Good call. It does look cleaner.
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The overall look of your site is soothing and inviting. And, yes, it also has a clean, crisp look. https://gracelead.co
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