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This is not my latest post, however I would like some feedback on the writing style as well as the length. I could have written much more (or even less). 🙂 http://guriausa.wordpress.com/2014/07/03/returning-to-new-york-city/
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I’m writing a post on tattoo stories, like what the story is behind a tattoo that you’ve gotten so if anyone could talk to me about that, I’d love to hear what you’ve got to say!
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as in, talk to you about our own tattoos?
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yeah or maybe tattoos you’d like to get and the reason behind it 🙂
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I’ve got “We Drank Turpentine In Paradise Alley” on my rib-cage which is an extract from ‘Howl’ by Allen Ginsberg. It’s my favorite poem. The line basically refers to people destroying themselves after realizing everything bad they have done. It’s a term relating to suicide & darkness but I saw it as metaphor for control & realization 🙂
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I know Howl and I think that’s a very interesting tattoo! Did you decide to get that line done after a something in particular had happened or was it premeditative?
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I actually had a few struggles with my mental health and decided to honor the turning point in my life with the tat. I’d fallen in love with that poem when I was 13 and thought it was most suitable 🙂
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I’ve had some similar struggles as well so thank you so much for telling me about it.I wish you all the best!
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good luck with your post!
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Thank you!
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Hi everyone! I have a blog where I post original short stories, but I’ve been experimenting with the length of the posts. My latest story was so long I posted it in three parts so as not to overwhelm my readers. So should I keep my stories short, post longer stories in parts, or just publish longer stories in one post? Any other thoughts about my blog would be greatly appreciated 😀
http://thedreamlifeofisabellafrye.wordpress.com/
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First, great writing! As far as posting in multiple parts, that’s a great question. The three parts of the story aren’t necessarily super short on their own. I imagine that if a reader makes it through to the end of the first part, you’ve got ’em.
I lean towards just putting it all in one post. The second and third posts end up being confusing on their own and require the reader to go to the first post anyway. I like the idea of having the whole story right there for the reader, because, like I said, I think if you get them to the end of the first post, you know they want to read the whole thing.
On the other hand, having a non-committal reader see a shorter post might get them to start reading and get them hooked when they might skip over a super long post. And there’s the possibility of building some anticipation for the readers who are really into it.
Haha, I don’t know if that helps at all. But really, I think it’s splitting hairs because the writing is really good. If a murder mystery fan finds their way to your story, they’ll enjoy it regardless of how you end up posting it.
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Thank you so much for your advice! I guess it really could go either way haha I’ll experiment and find out how people react. I’m so glad you enjoyed my writing!
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Hey there, just read Murder, It Wrote. The punny names are hilarious! I don’t think there’s a need to restrict yourself to certain story lengths, it just depends on the story you’re writing.
I think the way you divided Murder, It Wrote into three parts was excellent – you ended each part at a good resting point, giving each part a sense of conclusion and allowing the reader to rest a little before continuing. If you ever write more stories of that length, I’d say you should keep dividing them into parts like that. Breaking a story into parts is especially good for mystery/thriller stories.
Somewhat related, and this is a little nitpicky, but I think you should use the ‘Read More’ button to hide the bulk of your posts away. That would make scrolling through your main page a lot easier – a visitor wouldn’t have to go past an entire story to see what other posts you have.
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Thanks so much for your advice! I’ve heard mixed opinions about the splitting-up issue, so I really appreciate your opinion.
I was actually just in the middle of trying to get the ‘Read More’ button on my posts when I read your comment haha hopefully I’ll be able to figure it out.
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Hey! I would do as suggested above and use the read more button. Also, if you have already written your stories before posting them maybe post them backwards so part one starts at the top? I guess that only works if you are posting it all at once though. (I’m also on an iPhone so might be it just appeared funny on here). Finally, good writing! Keep it up 🙂
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I did consider posting them backwards and I’m considering trying that next time… if I have the full story written out in time haha. Thank you for your comment! Glad you liked my writing 😀
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LOVE your header!!! The one with the moon and the balloon 🙂
Liked and Followed, I will be keeping an eye on your stuff, as an avid reader (and Librarian) I am always interested in finding another writing blog 🙂
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Thank you so much!!
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How do I enable someone to click on a link to read my Pages? What http address do I have to give them? Or is it some magic code? Lost in the haunted wood here. Help !!
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If you’re on a desktop browser then click on the main page of your blog. Then copy and paste the link that’s displayed in your search bar 🙂
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After a few weeks of lethal tourist attractions I thought I should try and explain a little more about how my world works. Do you want to know more or should I go back to my deadly world tour?
http://nothingtoritehomeabout.wordpress.com/2014/07/06/its-a-kind-of-magic/
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Hello there fellow bloggers! I have had my blog for a few months and would like some feedback. I share alt/indie music that suits my life story and my ever changing moods. Any helpful suggestions would make me forever grateful! Anybody else frustrated with how wordpress posts to Tumbler?
http://immersedincoolmusic.wordpress.com/
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Hi! I am new to this so I would appreciate any feedback, but I’m mainly trying to figure the best layout for my page. You can send me feedback in the comments here. Thanks so much! http://ateachingparent.wordpress.com/
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Smaller font would be nice. Best of Luck
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I was wondering about that too. Thanks for your suggestion.
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I find the font a little small. But im also viewing it on my smartphone. Lay out is easy to navigate. I appreciate it with using my cell phone.
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Thanks for your feedback! 🙂
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Your welcome!
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Hi I enjoyed your top few posts. I do agree that the font is rather large, it means having to scroll down a lot even in a short post which would look nice and compact on one screen. I’ve followed 🙂
Check me out http://clickingmummy.wordpress.com/
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Hi! I made some changes to the font so I hope it helps. hanks for your feedback. 🙂
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It would be greatly appreciated if anyone could look at my first post as well! https://mymomboughtmeacamera.wordpress.com/
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http://azrairshad.wordpress.com/
Hi,
Please check my post regarding human being – the most complex system in the world.
Hope you will enjoy it.!
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Hi – I’m new to blogging, have only written two posts, but have had no comments. Be really helpful to have some feedback. Thanks. http://sraddha12.wordpress.com/2014/07/05/word-appeal/
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Enjoyed your post and commented. Check out my blog when you can. http://ethiopianmama.wordpress.com
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Hi all, really enjoying my first few weeks at this. One thing I am struggling to figure out, is the best time of the day to post! You can see my efforts at http://www.thebiggestlittlehills.com Cheers all. Shane
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You are talking to a global audience who are all on different times so as far as I am concerned, there is no optimum time to post. I tend to post in the early evening, but that’s when is most convenient for me to post.
I see you are based in Shropshire, a lovely part of the world!
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Thank you, and thank you! I’ve worked out Twitter well enough, but struggling to optimise this. That said, it took me a year before Twitter started to work for me. For some reason, I find 1600hrs on a Saturday to be a great WordPress time. Thanks for the kind words, and yes, Shropshire is fantastic!
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Just want to thank the creators and contributors – I love checking in and commenting on the posts here each week. Excellent resource for drawing inspiration!
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Your comments are always helpful, thoughtful and respectful, so thank you!
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I agree with you!
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Hi Shane,
As far as best time of day to post… I don’t think it really matters. I just try to post once per day and before 12:00 AM. Nice thing is that you can schedule your posts… so you can see what works best for you. I find that if I post by 12:00 AM I wake up to hits… love that!
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Hi I’m kind of new to the blogsphere, and I write about a variety of things from travel, to concerts, to CA lifestyle… like this one I just posted http://theoutletunplugged.com/2014/07/06/dubrovnik-croatia/
I was wondering to get some feedback? Are there things I can change about my blog, omit, maybe put in? What makes a blog “readable” or worthwhile? Thank you!
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Hi shane, I don’t have as much readers as i exoect and i don’t just put up links. I use pictures too but oh well, http://www.bullionhearts.wordpress.com.a sequel on love,romance and betrayal. Its worth visiting.
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http://www.bullionhearts.wordpress.com
the previous link was a mistake
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Hi everyone! I’m working on a summer project where I describe my first year at my medical school. Here’s my latest post and I’m wondering if it has any universal appeal, or if it’s just like an inside joke that no one else cares about.
Thank you!
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Hi, I am writing a blog for a project we are running for emergency services and communities, it’s the first blog so I would appreciate any comments good or bad about the blog. Specifically is it clear what we are doing?? Is it easy to navigate (tips welcomed) thanks
Blog is – 999eye’s Blog
https://999eye.wordpress.com/
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Hi.. and thank you! I’ll keep this brief because I’m past my bedtime and less than my alloted amount of time to sleep makes for a cranky morning! 🙂 I’m asking please for specific feedback. I drafted a piece that was way too long to publish as one post.. I try to mostly post 500 words or less because I don’t want you to be faced with too much to read and take in. I decided to make it a series of four posts.. two of which I have published. I’m wondering if that was a good idea… do they (so far) lead in to one another and also do they stand alone? Are they even interesting? I’m sharing the development and exploration my own process and ideas about finding your purpose and hidden strengths. I’m brain fried looking at them now so a fresh pair of eyes would be appreciated. I said I’d keep it brief so I will. Thank you if you decided to help me out 🙂 Goodnight, Amanda x
http://amandajgrace.wordpress.com/2014/07/05/life-purpose/
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I think the posts stand alone well and the pics are well chosen to break up the text. They do lead into one another because they are along the same theme, you could link them even closer by perhaps calling them a mini-series and at the end of each one write something like, don’t for get to come back for part 2.
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I’m sorry, I went back to your page and realised that you wrote that part in about it being a series. I have no idea how I missed that, I think it is just that it is the end of a long day and my brain is tired and I need a cuppa 🙂
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Thank you ditchthebun! I do have a link from each, but I’m glad you pointed it out because it’s obviously not noticeable enough. I kinda buried that information down the very end of the post after my signature… Funny that.. I was shying away from being more direct in signposting people around my posts.
Great feedback, thank you… Can I do anything for your blog in return? Amanda
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My blog tells stories of parenting, modern life, relationships, family, care taking and teens through the eyes of a Vampire Mom. Don’t stop reading – I don’t do sparkly stuff or dripping blood. Anyway I also read a lot of blogs on totally unrelated subjects as well (squirrels, art, books, history, cooking etc.) My favorite blogs all have regular features and themes. I think it regular features build a sense of community by giving everyone something to look forward to and talk about. What do you think? What are your experiences?
Thanks. ~ Juliette aka Vampire Maman
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Hey guys!! I’m working on this book called “Captured.” I would love some feedback. I only have the first chapter up for now. here’s the link:
http://hashriskybooks.wordpress.com/
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Hi, I have just started up my blog and would appreciate feedback on the posts http://lipstickandblackcoffee.wordpress.com/ I would also like to know how to improve visibility. Thank you.
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Hi people,
I just started a blog that aims to create a list of soundtracks for life, where I share a tune and then write short meditations around the theme or simply whatever the tune inspires me. Or vice versa.
http://soundtracksfortwentysomethings.wordpress.com/
I’d be the happiest if you checked it out – and shared your thoughts about it.
If you feel like it, suggest a tune as well 🙂
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Hey guys, just starting out and would love some general feedback on my blog. Whatever comes to mind, be it about content, layout, or writing. Thanks in advance to anyone who reads my blog. http://opinionatednautilus.wordpress.com
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Hello bloggers, I’ve got a specific question about my recent post. Does it belong on a blog like mine? Please have a look and leave comments: http://ethiopianmama.wordpress.com/2014/07/07/goldcoastsuns/
Thanks! 🙂
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Hi everyone…..I would really love to get some feedback on my new blog especially when it comes to my posts. I keep feeling that maybe I ramble an my posts are a bit too wordy, though I plan to start trying different writing styles once I get a schedule down….so any an all feed back is welcomed
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Can we say “Duh” I forgot to put the title of my blog on here….it’s Life Food and Me.com
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http://lifefoodandme.com/
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Hi I just started and I think I have posted my first blog, but I am not shure how can you guys check plese.
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Your post won’t be visible to everyone until you hit the “Publish” button — I believe your post is still a draft, which means only you can see it.
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Friend, it is unfortunate that you see the recognition of truth as a perversion. Less than 10 percent is not a mischaracterization of small in considering the whole; 17 countries is very few of the 196 countries of the world.
I did not recommend any denial of human rights. Each person has the right to follow God’s laws or not. That is a fact of life.
Unfortunately, you did not answer my question, directed at the leadership of this blog. Thanks for writing a civil response. God bles and guide you.
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You said “a few” countries and I wanted to point out that seventeen (plus others granting other degrees of rights) is more than a few. Yes, the percentage compared to the whole isn’t very large but this is changing quickly.
I am glad you don’t recommend any denial of human rights. What I read in your comment was an implicit support of those places that have deemed homosexual behavior illegal. Perhaps I misinterpreted. But, denying people the right to love who they choose and denying them legal protections, jailing them, or worse for consensual relationships is a denial of human rights.
Every person can follow God’s laws or not. Every person can also examine for themselves whether or not they believe in a god(s). There are many different religions in this world, and even within religions there is huge diversity. There are also many non-religious people (who still have a strong sense of a moral compass, even without religion). Just because someone judges that by their perception of God’s rules that something is immoral doesn’t mean that others see it so.
I think it is best to love and support everyone as long as they are causing no harm to others.
I can’t answer your original question because I don’t know every person who selects posts for Freshly Pressed. I am not affiliated at all. But I find your suggestion that someone is paying “media controllers” as off target. My impression is that those selecting articles try to choose some that are relevant to current events and given that during these past weeks Pride has happened in many cities and that in Indiana the court struck down the state ban on same-sex marriage makes posts dealing with LGBT topics very relevant.
Thanks for keeping it civil as well.
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i am new here can any one help me that how can i improve my blog plz any body help me…
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Hey all, I’m hoping to get some constructive criticism/feedback on my writing. http://adaer.wordpress.com/category/writing-2/
As an aspiring writer, I’ve been feeling the need to improve my writing beyond my current limits but I need people other than myself to look over my stuff. If you have an interest in my writing, please leave a comment!
Feel free to comment on any of my non-writing related posts if it strikes your fancy, of course.
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