Today, we challenge you to create a compelling setting for your story.
In the world of storytelling, setting refers to the time and place in which a story happens. For example, Charles Dickens’ Oliver Twist takes place in 19th century England. One of my all-time favorite novels, Caught, by Lisa Moore, takes place in 1970s Newfoundland. Where and when does your favorite novel unfold?
Droids? On the Farm?
Every story would be another story, and unrecognizable as art, if it took up its character and plot and happened somewhere else.
— Eudora Welty
Consider this: what if Charlotte’s Web was set in the future in a galaxy far far away as opposed to an idyllic farm? What if Star Wars‘ C-3PO and R2D2 were rolling about the Zuckerman farm in 1950s America trying to evade the Empire’s forces?
These might make for interesting variations, though the dissonance in these sample setting variations can make your head spin. Appropriate settings augment a story, conferring it with gravity, while inappropriate settings can simply confuse readers. Today, we challenge you to write a setting into the scene of your choice.
Sweat the details: creating a strong setting
There are two ways to participate in the challenge:
Write a new, original post based on any characters you wish, though the scene you share must include details that help the reader understand the setting: the precise time and place in which your scene happens. You can choose to write about current people and places, if you wish. As always, you’re welcome to adapt the challenge as you see fit or put your own twist on it. The goal is to get you writing.
Choose to write the setting into one of the scenes below, taking care to insert details that evoke the time and place in which the scene is set:
- A man and his wife meet for lunch in a diner on August 5th, 1970, in New York City. She’s pregnant and plans to spill the beans over lunch.
- A 12-year-old girl has her first day in her new school, after moving from California to London, England, on September 8th, 1992.
- A five-year-old boy disembarks from the Vulcania at Pier 21 in Halifax, Nova Scotia, setting foot on Canadian soil for the first time on January 30th, 1960, after emigrating from Italy.
- A horrific fire burns down the most important monument in your town, last Friday.
Elements that can help evoke setting detail include the objects that surround your characters, as well as the clothing they wear, and the type of speech they use. What sort of vehicles are used for transportation? Which clothes are fashionable? Unfashionable? Is there music playing in your scene? That too, can help transport your readers to a precise time and place.
Looking for a little more guidance and some inspiration? Matthew Weiner, creator of the television show Mad Men is famous for insisting on period-appropriate clothing, props, and music for the show, to the point of recreating the weather on critical days in history! Now that’s attention to setting.
Have fun setting your scenes. You might even have to do a little research! I can’t wait to read what you write.
Yes, Funny and ineresting to do …and to read. I’ll try
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and here is my answer : http://icezine.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/once-upon-a-time-yesterday/
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I loved Oliver twist. It truly was and is a stunning book.
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I slightly altered the challenge because I blog anonymously. So, it’s not my hometown and it’s not last Friday.
Fiction is fun:
http://bumblepuppies.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/general-stupidity-insults-my-intelligence/
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Very interesting to read and motivating which is the most important thing! Brilliant post!
Phoenixflames12 x
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Star Wars is actually a great example. Many believe that Lucas was inspired by Spaghetti Westerns but decided to set it in space.
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As in real estate, the key is location, location, location.
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Actually, it’s impossible to “recreate” the setting of anything in the past. It’s only possible to make it believable to people who were not there.
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Absolutely true. That’s why the details are so important as you try to create a vivid picture in the reader’s mind.
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I would like to enter some of your writing contests. Where do I put my blogs?
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Are you back for good then ? Or are you doing something other than that which you were doing previously, Krista …?
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M.R., You’ve missed me!
I’ve been helping out with the Blogging Challenges but haven’t gone very far. 😀
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Friday Evening: http://loyalmuse.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/friday-evening/
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Thanks! This is interesting. Let’s see what I can come up with. 😛
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A moving story.
http://maryjmelange.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/scenes-from-a-move/
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Hey, my first time at this, hope it is correct:
http://epicbloggingnow.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/the-werewolf/
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A difficult challenge for a story – seeing that Halifax is on the other side of the globe. How to bring together the southern tip of Africa with Canada. And yet, in the 60’s, Canadians rallied in the fight against Apartheid. So…here it is: the link with the time, the location, and a storyteller coming home. http://rolbos.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/the-story-teller/
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A hallway and kitchen are the setting for this game of cat and mouse…
http://haiverer.wordpress.com/2014/05/12/the-settings-the-thing/
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This was really fun! I would love for you to let me know what you think. I am response number 11 below.
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This turned out to be quite a fun exercise. I placed my favorite Dwarves from The Misty Mountain on another battlefield… http://bellemorgen.wordpress.com/2014/05/13/the-settings-the-thing/
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Using all five senses I considered what make my State my home. Tapping into all of your senses is what creates setting. I hope you enjoy: http://barbararath.com/2014/05/13/wkly-brief-idol-homecoming-2/
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A little something … http://teepee12.com/2014/05/14/the-wall/
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http://wp.me/p3ZISx-1MI
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My first weekly writing challenge post .. eek .. http://creamcheesebreadandworldpeace.wordpress.com/2014/05/14/weekly-writing-challenge-the-settings-the-thing/
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Here’s mine. Let me know what you think!
http://ljdaluz.wordpress.com/2014/05/14/weekly-writing-challenge-the-settings-the-thing/
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I decided to do a second one:
http://bumblepuppies.wordpress.com/2014/05/14/caveman-dentistry-insults-my-intelligence/
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I don’t see my DP Challenge submission in the pingback list, so here it is again: http://barbararath.com/2014/05/13/wkly-brief-idol-homecoming-2/ . I use my DP Challenge link on the post to get to this site, so I believe it is working. Please let me know if I missed a step.
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I see that you’ve got the link to the Challenge at the bottom of your post. Note that if you use “https” instead of “http” as part of the URL, that pesky letter “s” will prevent your pingback from appearing on the list below.
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Thank you so much! Removing the “s” in https did the trick.
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http://justmomentarily.com/2014/05/15/whats-knittin-kitten/
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Oooh this is really exciting! I just posted mine on my blog. It’s a setting from the novel I’m writing.
Thanks for the inspiration!
http://konstantia.com/?p=692
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Not related to this, but to today’s Daily Prompt (because comments aren’t allowed there):
The pingbacks aren’t working. I did a post for it and so did a few of the bloggers I follow, so I know I didn’t simply mess something up. Right now, the page lists no posts.
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Looks like we forgot one element of the magic spell required to publish prompts for today. All fixed — thanks for pointing that out, Bumblepuppies!
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Always one for excess, enjoy:
http://rockandrollsupermom.wordpress.com/2014/05/15/the-scarlet-later/
http://rockandrollsupermom.wordpress.com/2014/05/15/delilah-gate/
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A tribute for all those unsung heroes who put their blood, sweat and tears for an effort that we admire today.
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This was a good outlet for something I wrote impromptu a few hours ago for the Daily Prompt. I am really inspired by these challenges and they seem to be taking root in a very valuable way! As far as setting is concerned, I think as readers we need to have a very clear ear to hear where the story takes place. There are very subtle cues that give way to setting and if we are keeping a close eye on the sights there, we can truly feel like we are a part of the story and can experience it as well. Here’s my attempt…
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