Craft a story from the perspective of a twelve-year-old observer. For your twist, focus on specific character qualities, drawing from elements we’ve worked on in this course, like voice and dialogue.
The neighbourhood has seen better days, but Mrs. Pauley has lived there since before anyone can remember. She raised a family of six boys, who’ve all grown up and moved away. Since Mr. Pauley died three months ago, she’d had no income. She’s fallen behind in the rent. The landlord, accompanied by the police, have come to evict Mrs. Pauley from the house she’s lived in for forty years.
Today’s prompt: write this story in first person, told by the twelve-year-old sitting on the stoop across the street.
First person, second person, third person, whew! Point of view is a type of narrative mode, which is the method by which a story’s plot is conveyed to the audience. Point of view reveals not only who is telling the story, but also how it is told. Consider a recent short story published on The Worship Collective, “Funny Things,” in which the narrator is a child who has passed away.
Need a refresher on first-person narration? Recall Scout Finch, the six-year-old first-person narrator of Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird. Scout tells the story through her eyes:
It was times like these when I thought my father, who hated guns and had never been to any wars, was the bravest man who ever lived.
“‘Remember it’s a sin to kill a mockingbird.’ That was the only time I ever heard Atticus say it was a sin to do something, and I asked Miss Maudie about it.”
Today’s twist: For those of you who want an extra challenge, think about more than simply writing in first-person point of view — build this twelve-year-old as a character. Reveal at least one personality quirk, for example, either through spoken dialogue or inner monologue.
Refer to some of the exercises we’ve done on character, dialogue, and even sentence length to help craft this person. All of these storytelling elements can combine to create a strong point of view.
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Reply To Writing 101: Hone Your Point Of View – the Shire
http://impossiblebebong.wordpress.com/2014/10/08/the-shire/
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Could you give the Links to exercises on character, dialogue and sentence length?
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You can find all the assignments here:
https://wordpress.com/dailypost/courses/writing-101-build-a-blogging-habit/
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http://dailylifesj.wordpress.com/2014/10/08/across-the-road/
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So I tried to play with my demons and write on the darker side as I call it. Please read and let me know your views, thoughts, suggestions and creative criticism is always welcome.
http://wordytale.wordpress.com/2014/10/08/forever-asleep/
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Writing is a way of transferring knowledge through print. To write effectively you must start reading a lot. Then making summaries of what you read for each subject solely. This is a way to start if you can read and write English or your mother language well.
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Good tip… Thank you!
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Hey guys this is my Blog! Don’t forget to check it out! And please do leave your feedback!
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This is gonna be interesting! Will work on it!
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Ha ha! This was quite easy as I am a twelve year old. But please do check it out and tell me how it is. Is the intro too long? Thanks to all those who do!
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Used this as inspiration for my post.
http://jacquelinebrinkman.wordpress.com/2014/10/09/point-of-viewmy-friend-skipper/
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This is so “Ocean at the End of the Lane” except that the narrator is a middle-aged man talking like he’s seven again.
I missed to do this one. I’ll try this on the weekend.
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I hope this works! 😀 http://caliten.wordpress.com/2014/10/09/parents/
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Here’s an attempt to tell a story through the eyes of a character I can’t even begin to understand. I fear that it will just be annoying for the reader…give it a shot…it’s short.
http://whisper2scream.wordpress.com/2014/10/10/hone-your-point-of-view-challenge-on-time/
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My spin on it.
http://diariesofthenight.wordpress.com/2014/10/11/writing-101-hone-your-point-of-view/
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Very good tips!
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This took a bit more effort than before. Hope you got my loose use of quirk, and the 2nd half didn’t stray too much from the “observation” aspect of it.
http://pawcificpurrsea.wordpress.com/2014/10/14/the-derelict-vessel-mrs-pauley/
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Better late than never. Here is my assignment. Perhaps one more to go?http://worldwidesoulmate.wordpress.com/2014/10/27/writing-101-a-story-told-by-a-twelve-year-old/
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http://freddierockgodgander.wordpress.com/2014/10/07/writing-101-hone-your-point-of-view/
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