What are you scared of? Address one of your worst fears. If you’re up for a twist, write this post in a style that’s different from your own.
We all have anxieties, worries, and fears. What are you scared of? Address one of your worst fears.
Today’s twist: Write this post in a style distinct from your own.
Earlier in Writing 101, both Michelle and I have talked about voice: that elusive element that sets you apart from every other writer out there. Style, however, is different. Your writing style might affect your voice, but ultimately style and voice aren’t the same thing.
While your voice is your own, and something that’s innately you, style is much broader. You might prefer long and complex sentences, or sentences with a lot of commas and layers building upon each other, or perhaps intentional run-ons and thoughts bleeding into the next and no pauses and lots of imagery and never-ending moments that run onto the next page.
Or, you might write short sentences. Fragments, even. Simple prose.
Think back to your assignment on sentence lengths. What kinds of sentences do you prefer, or find yourself writing naturally?
Style is the answer to everything.
A fresh way to approach a dull or dangerous thing.
To do a dull thing with style is preferable to doing a dangerous thing without it.
To do a dangerous thing with style is what I call art.— Charles Bukowski
Novelist Raymond Chandler also called style the most durable thing in your writing — “a projection of personality, the product of emotion and perception.” While writers have their own styles, style can be mimicked — you can approach a piece intentionally to create a certain effect. (We once asked writers to write in Hunter S. Thompson’s gonzo style — take a peek for inspiration.)
If you need a boost, consider these examples of style: Thompson’s Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, Ernest Hemingway’s “Hills Like White Elephants,” and Toni Morrison’s Beloved.
Need a helping hand? Head to The Commons.
Hmmm… I love the idea but this one may be challenging. I have a regular style but I write so much outside of that style that it will be tough to think of something new and different.
However, I like playing with style so I’ll surely come up with something. This is a prompt I don’t plan to skip.
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Same issue here. I am so used to my own style, that will be difficult to change it…
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This is going to be very, very difficult.
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It should be interesting!
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Interesting challenge!!
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My biggest fear me
So filled with anxiety
Never to be free
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I’m right there with you…
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Lovely — I encourage you to post this — and expand on it! — on your own blog.
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I can not figure out how to post this to my page.
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Excellent. Can so relate.
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Here is my Day 17 offering, A Laugh in a Crowd. Definitely not my usual style.
http://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/a-laugh-in-a-crowd/
Much Respect
Ronovan
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Very personal, this is gonna be hard.
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i agree!
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http://marthakennedy.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/it-aint-me-babe/
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Fear of the unknown is the most dangerous fear in the world . Fear of what you did not know whether exist or not, but still afraid of it.
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This it true, from perhaps from trying the unknown it gives us the rope to grow as writers.
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Here’s mine!
http://dx0330.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/personal-feelings-aside/
I attempted at the Twist, but I’m not sure that I succeeded.
A brilliant assignment today, 🙂
Please leave a comment (telling me how I did) or a like (if you did) ^-^
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To overcome fear of unknown is to forge ahead and look at it as if it does not exist. Before you know the cloud will clear.
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Thanks for leaving these little bits in response to the assignment — I encourage you to post them (and expand on your thoughts) in a post on your own blog, then share the link here or in the Commons. Better to have your material on your own site than amid fragments in the post comments.
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Jeez I love that Bukowski fellow. Every word is gold. He’s got a great poem that’s always stuck so deeply in my mind called The Suicide Kid.
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My biggest fear has been the dreaded empty nest…I hate that phrase. Can we please name it something else? I feel like as my kids leave, one by one, I am feeling better about this and regaining my sense of self, but we’ll see how things are after the last one leaves!
http://amforte66.wordpress.com/2014/04/16/me-myself-and-i/
I have a 15 year old student dying in a hospital of liver cancer today so I have to say posting this as my fear seems so lame. Honestly, I’m so lucky to have everyday that I have with my kids whether or not they are living under the same roof with me or not. Shine on, Matthew.
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My best wishes to your student. Sending good thoughts your way.
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Big holes. In thought. In losing ground. In the ground – (How big do sink holes get anyway? Can you jump start those with a little one? Is that what happened to Alice? Don’t ask me…it’s a worry, though)
“Missing U”
http://philosophermouseofthehedge.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/missing-u/
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http://thoughtsofajunkiemisfit.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/unknowing-the-unknown/
hmmm better! I like this one. Its real. Raw. Arcane.
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Love the quick bursts. The short sentences. You create a great rhythm — looks like you had fun with this.
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i fear long sentences, out of fear of boredom. here i tried some. i also hate third person perspective, out of fear of being exposed to be a terrible writer. i tried this here, too. thanks for this challenging idea
http://guthonestfaith.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/die-fcker-die/
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That’s great that you took the plunge and tried something different — even something like long sentences.
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You have nothing to be afraid of. That was some very strong writing you posted. The long sentences you were afraid of had nice flow to them. This one in particular struck me:
“Downstairs, five flight of stairs lower, the city drunks were spending their time in the local booze parlour or pissing a stream of vodka back out onto the children’s play ground.”
Terrific visual.
Loved the Lana Del Rey reference as well.
You can write, and well. Stop being afraid.
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Thanks for giving specific, thoughtful feedback. Much appreciated.
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thanks Guz, for feed back! like Cheri said, its very specific, and therefore incredibly helpful as well as super encouraging! have a great rest of the week!
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thanks Cheri for the heads up=)
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Here ya go… Inside the mind of Kate…
https://flippyzipflop.wordpress.com/wp-admin/post.php?post=71&action=edit&message=6&postpost=v2
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I found it difficult, as english is my second language.
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You are welcome to write in any language that you’re comfortable with. Of course, if you’d like to practice English, please feel free. Whatever works for you 🙂
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Many tries with it shall improve your writing
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A fear of failing
http://caughtuproductions.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/my-biggest-fear/
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My short little ditty on maybe being scared – “Practically Not Scared” – and not the way I would write it. Like always, it is here: http://www.buddycushmanart.com Love feedback
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I’m not sure about the change of style, but this is my fear for sure http://joantatley.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/the-deepest-fear/
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Thanks for sharing and writing about your fear of not having/following your dreams.
As for practicing another type of style — one suggestion I could give for next time is going over the top with it. For example, using another writer/piece of writing as a guide, and exaggerating the style you’re mimicking. It’s harder to notice a shift in style if the change is subtle. It’d be more as an experiment, really, and wouldn’t necessarily be something you have to publish on your blog.
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i see now. I need to find someone I want to mimick. Thanks for advice.
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https://wordpress.com/dailypost/dp_assignment/writing-101-day-seventeen/
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My take on mortality. my deepest fear. http://voicingaloud.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/mortality/
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I tried to mimic Lemony Snicket’s way of writing in A Series of Unfortunate Events. Try being the operative word since I recognize that this doesn’t even come close to how he writes. Also, in my head, I imagine that someone is narrating this in the background ala Pushing Daisies (I’ve been watching it lately) or Cat in the Hat.
Any kind of feedback would be lovely 🙂
http://thatgirlfromfriday.wordpress.com/2014/06/25/peaking-too-soon/
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Here is my contribution for the day…
http://kartikkotian.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/the-crossroad/
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http://bladeslife.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/fear-of-betrayal-or-abandonment-writing-101-day-seventeen/
I hope this made sense. It was a little bit of a ramble, but any feedback would be useful. Thanks for the great challenges guys.
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http://randomwritingsofme.wordpress.com/
I don’t like writing about my weaknesses. However, good topic.
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Oops. Here is a direct link to the post:
http://randomwritingsofme.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/my-fear-writing-101-day-seventeen/
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http://thethingsiyell.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/writing-101-day-seventeen-authenticity/
I fear I’ll lose the ones I love if I’m honest with them. But if I’m not I’ll lose part of me. Let me know what you think.
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Regarding your comment – I feel this way about telling my friends about my blog. I am happy for strangers to read it, but friends ……? My writing is quite different from the social person I portray most of the time. I will read your article now but your comment caught my attention. Best wishes
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It’s been a long time (decades, in fact) since I read John Updike so I looked up a sample to refresh my memory. Let me know how I did.
http://jrosensite.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/writing-101-day-17-fear-the-john-updike-way/
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Really good idea. So difficult to write in a style different to your own .. but managed to curb my natural waffle down to a minimum so it’s not like me at all really!
https://creamcheesebreadandworldpeace.wordpress.com/2014/06/24/writing-101-day-seventeen-your-personality-on-the-page/
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Fun. I’ll use a style that’s not different from my own, but one that I haven’t used in a long time. I think I might be vague too. I am never vague.
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