Community Pool

The Community Pool is for those of you looking for feedback, whether on post ideas, writing, blog design and layout, or anything else.

If you have a post, page, or idea you want to bounce off someone, leave a comment. Your fellow bloggers can then click through and offer input either on your site, or in the comments here (feel free to indicate which you’d prefer).

Read on for the ground rules and to leave a comment . .

TIP: To keep from losing your place in the comment thread while you visit others’ blogs, right-click on a link to open it in a new tab or window.

  • You’ll get the best feedback if you can be as specific as possible about what you’d like people to respond to or where you’re struggling. If you simply leave a link to your blog, it’s likely to be overlooked.
  • Please keep all comments civil and constructive. We’re here to help and support one another, not to beat anyone down.
  • If you haven’t looked at our Commenting Guidelines in a while, now might be a good time.
  • No running on the deck.

Photo by t_a_i_s.

Show Comments

515 Comments

Comments are closed.

Close Comments

Comments

    1. Hi! I checked out your page. I love stories so I’m going to follow you. I like your flow, it was easy for me to get sucked in. The only little critiques I have … Just keep in mind that the bigger portion of the blogging community … So I’ve heard doesn’t get attracted to lengthy lengthy stuff. So I think a “to be continued” in the middle of your stories sometimes would give them that break that they think they want. Also always go back and check grammar there was like one word and the letters were switched around but who doesn’t do that sometimes. So yeah, hope this helped. I am new too so check me out if you’d like.

      https://hervoicesince1990.wordpress.com/

      Like

      1. Thank you! I’m glad you liked my stories. And thanks for the critiques it’s always hard for me to keep things short. And for a few of my post it was part of blogging 101. They tell you not to go back in fix your mistakes. I think they were trying to killing us writers. Lol. But I do need to grammar I’ve always sucked at it. Thank you again for checking out my stuff. I followed you back. I love your posts. The ‘Sex’ one I really relate to.

        Like

      2. Oh well… I didn’t know that. LOL, I always go back and fix my mistakes. And yeah.. Grammar bites me in the butt all the time. Thank you so much though! Keep posting I’ll be reading :).

        Like

  1. Just saw this! “community pool” huh? Very cool! I’m a health coach striving to help people gain a better perspective on a healthy lifestyle. I just recently joined so not to many posts on my end but i’ll get there. If ever interested let me know in a comment. Enjoy your day fellow Bloggers!

    Like

  2. Hi everyone! I’m new on here! I’ve written two blogs so far, I’d love it if you could go to my page and have a look, I’d firstly just like to know if people are interested in them, and then if anyone has any tips in general of how to make them more interesting, if they’re too long, etc…thanks guys! Any support/advice is appreciated :))

    Like

    1. I’m new here as well so feel free to visit my page and let me know what you think under some post if you’d like. I’ve only got five up.

      I like your posts. I think they’re very real and insightful. I like that your pieces are bold. Not many people can open up about personal views and be as raw as I think you were. They were both lengthy but, I kept reading because I heard you in the message and I wanted to finish. I like that it was kind of like a conversation. So yeah, post more, maybe shorten it and yeah love it!

      My link is

      https://hervoicesince1990.wordpress.com/

      Like

  3. I just started my blog as well. It is filled with memories from my childhood. Kinda Therapy for me. But with so much material I am afraid that I am going to get lost from story to story. They aren’t in any order and I like it that way. I would love any advice anyone has or to comment on how I am doing. Thanks in advance.

    Like

    1. I really like your page. I love memoirs. I like that it’s out of order as well, it’s more enticing that way. We never remember things in order anyway. The flow was very warm and it broke my heart when your dog died. Smh. The only little tip I have is look out for grammar. But I love your page lol in following you I can’t wait for the next one. I’m new too so check me out give me your opinion under a post if you like.

      https://hervoicesince1990.wordpress.com/

      Like

  4. Hello everyone! I’m also new here and I have just started my blog. There are only 3 posts now but I will keep on improving it as time goes. About me: I’m currently a sophomore at Ohio Northern University and my major is business. I’m also an international student with English as a second language. This summer I’m taking a course on social media strategies and that is a main reason why I started my blog—in general it is focused on some thoughts and comments about what I learned on social media strategies and how social media are used to benefit businesses and customers. Another main reason is to improve my English writing. From taking notes about the course and introducing my life at ONU, I hope that I can better learn how to write in a natural and effective way. So, please feel free to check my page and leave feedback 

    About ME

    Also, I’m looking for some blogs with a focus on social media strategies and the development of social networking, so if anyone can provide inspirations or share some ideas on these topics, I would really appreciate it!
    Thank you in advance!

    Like

  5. @ Michelle

    What is the policy on non-Wordpress.com blogs appearing here? I went to look at one blog (through the link in the user’s name) and there was no mention of WP or a theme. (The WP black bar was also absent from the top of my screen.)

    Obviously, I didn’t want to provide feedback unless they were here legally.

    Like

    1. The Community Pool is open to anyone to participate, though the vast majority of bloggers that participate in the pool are on WordPress.com

      Like

  6. Hi! I’m a new blogger and was wondering if y’all could take a look at my first few posts and layouts to see if there were any improvements I could make now or for future posts! Anything is greatly appreciated!!

    Like

  7. Good morning. My blog is about my becoming a grandmother. I talk about my thoughts, frustrations and feelings on what a grandmother is, what she does and how she behaves as a grandmother. i also talk about how grandmothers can influence the children in their lives. So far, I’ve gotten my inspiration from grandparents.com, but they seem to be a bit mild (although that isn’t the right word). I would like to see what others might suggest as a worthy topic.

    dayspringacres.wordpress.com

    Like

  8. Hi everyone, I have recently started my second blog which is specifically about my life after my marriage ended. I chose the My Life Theme for the blog, I am not happy with the appearance of this particular blog.For some reason I have two columns for the administration of the blog I have tried with no success to delete one column so that my blog can be good to look at. I would appreciate any help. The address of the new blog is:- december18blog.wordpress.com
    Thanking you in anticipation.

    Like

  9. I write articles on issues in society as well as unanswered questions or even ones that cannot be answered. I wrote my first one today if anyone is willing to give it a quick read that would be much appreciated!

    Like

  10. Hey everyone,
    I’m an earth science student and have made a blog in the hope of getting people interested in earth science. Whether you love or hate science, check it out and tell me what you think!
    It’s at:
    unearthscience.wordpress.com
    I hope to hear from you 🙂

    Like

  11. Hi peeps, just posted my second post. Currently use the adele theme but for some reason my title isn’t showing up on screen. It is there when I go to edit but I can’t see it on the posted page. Really annoying. Any ideas as to why this is happening?

    Thanks x

    Like