Blogs about: Endless Redraft
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Hope (3)
Another day it smells of coffee, the kind my mother found in Panama returning from her cruise. It fills a warm house, the inside cuff of a woolen cardigan; anxious on a bus, it comforts you. Sometime… more »
Secret Agent Artist
Hope (3)
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secretagentartist wrote 1 month ago: Another day it smells of coffee, the kind my mother found in Panama returning from her cruise. It fi … more »
Go Between (50 billion)
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secretagentartist wrote 3 months ago: I met one of your teachers just the other day - the one with the name like gosling - soft feathers o … more »
Go Between (another draft)
secretagentartist wrote 4 months ago: I met one of your teachers just the other day - the one with the name like gosling - soft feathers o … more »
Post, Post
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secretagentartist wrote 5 months ago: Post Match After the roar and the grunt of the thundering masses - the players look small. The silen … more »
New Draft
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Hmmm…seems that last ‘fragment’ post ended up containing nearly enough to be the w … more »
Elizabeth (2nd go)
secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: I don’t want fame impossible to say and not sound false but I never did and just as well, I don’ … more »
Elizabeth Herick first redraft
secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Ok. This is the very slightly adapted first version… Elizabeth Heyrick I don’t want fame … more »
Final Draft?
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: A Bike Called Fury What makes it worse is that My Fury was probably stolen by a man A man - with bol … more »
Solomon's Child (2)
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Shortly after bike number 3 was taken from me, I saw stolen bike number 2 - tethered in town, It was … more »
A Bike Called Fury (3)
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Think this version is stronger…but a little too close to it now. Constructive crit welcome! Wh … more »
Tethered Like Gulliver (2)
secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: You cannot see them- but I am tethered like Gulliver. For every hour that I have slept, another tiny … more »
Shout out to my homies...
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Just been playing with the way this sounds, line break wise. Not sure if an improvement or not. Does … more »
Rain Dog
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: I think this version’s better. Rain Dog It’s sitting at the bottom of my bed, glossy, black … more »
At the risk of starting to sound neurotic...
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secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: How about this version? I’ve given up calling it the final one. sigh… I want an apology. … more »
Sorry, again.
secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Ok-some tiny changes in the main body…and I think the ending’s stronger now… I wan … more »
