Blogs about: Endless Redraft

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Hope (3)3 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 month ago: Another day it smells of coffee, the kind my mother found in Panama returning from her cruise. It fi … more »

Tags: Poetry

Go Between (50 billion)1 comment

secretagentartist wrote 3 months ago: I met one of your teachers just the other day - the one with the name like gosling - soft feathers o … more »

Tags: Poetry

Go Between (another draft)

secretagentartist wrote 4 months ago: I met one of your teachers just the other day - the one with the name like gosling - soft feathers o … more »

Tags: Poetry

Post, Post4 comments

secretagentartist wrote 5 months ago: Post Match After the roar and the grunt of the thundering masses - the players look small. The silen … more »

Tags: Poetry, Project work

New Draft2 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Hmmm…seems that last ‘fragment’ post ended up containing nearly enough to be the w … more »

Tags: Poetry, feminist, Freedom

Elizabeth (2nd go)

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: I don’t want fame impossible to say and not sound false but I never did and just as well, I don’ … more »

Tags: feminist, Freedom

Elizabeth Herick first redraft

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Ok. This is the very slightly adapted first version… Elizabeth Heyrick I don’t want fame … more »

Tags: feminist, Freedom

Final Draft?6 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: A Bike Called Fury What makes it worse is that My Fury was probably stolen by a man A man - with bol … more »

Tags: Poetry, Journal

Solomon's Child (2)2 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Shortly after bike number 3 was taken from me, I saw stolen bike number 2 - tethered in town, It was … more »

Tags: Poetry, Journal

A Bike Called Fury (3)1 comment

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Think this version is stronger…but a little too close to it now. Constructive crit welcome! Wh … more »

Tags: Poetry, Rant

Tethered Like Gulliver (2)

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: You cannot see them- but I am tethered like Gulliver. For every hour that I have slept, another tiny … more »

Tags: Poetry, feminist, Freedom

Shout out to my homies...3 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Just been playing with the way this sounds, line break wise. Not sure if an improvement or not. Does … more »

Tags: Craziness, Poetry

Rain Dog2 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: I think this version’s better. Rain Dog It’s sitting at the bottom of my bed, glossy, black … more »

Tags: Poetry, Craziness

At the risk of starting to sound neurotic...7 comments

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: How about this version? I’ve given up calling it the final one. sigh… I want an apology. … more »

Tags: Poetry, Journal, feminist, Craziness

Sorry, again.

secretagentartist wrote 1 year ago: Ok-some tiny changes in the main body…and I think the ending’s stronger now… I wan … more »

Tags: Poetry, feminist


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